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Read Morei won't shed a tear no i'll never weep my only lover is fear and with her i sleep i won't lose this war no I'll never retreat my lover knows the score and she's tired of defeat i won't bare the mark no i'll never sin my lover...
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Detritus. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I sense the merging of poetry and song .. it seems even back then you had something of a golden pen sir D .. Neville 😎👍
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was one of those writes that I knew I had something good, but I never considered myself a poet in those days, I was a lyric writer and engulfed fully into songwriting at that moment in my life. I always believed a lyricist wasn’t on the same level as a poet. Even, Bob Dylan, one of the best lyricist’s of all time has never considered himself a poet. I think a little differently these days. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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DAMN! If this is your 1st poem, this is excellent. Has a lyrical flow. Nicely said my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was one of the first for sure, maybe even number one. I was a lyricist first at the time in my life. There were a couple different poems I penned in 96. I just put the year on my writes back then, anyhow there were a couple of poems scattered throughout my lyric book. Back when everything was handwritten. lol. I was just always pulled to rereading this one a lot. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oh! This is damn good.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow. Fantastic.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Your talent was there from the beginning. Great metaphorical poem, Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This made it to my book cuz. Beautifully done.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. I’m honored to make it into your book my friend. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Damien with an edge! I dig it.
It has a great rhythm and flow.
Thanks for sharing something you hold dear.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Yeah, I had a little bit of an edge back in the day. lol. I’m so glad I shared it, and I do hold this one dear. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian your poem is as lyrical as it is deep. The idea of fear as a lover is a brilliant metaphor and I could really hear the melody of your words. Loved the creative flow here that took me into an exquisitely unfolding song.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s the idea of fear as a lover that always draws me back to this write as well. One of my better ideas. Glad you enjoyed the journey. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That was what was so cool about it to me as well. “Fear as a lover.” Spot on my friend, Right back at you.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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What a splendid start of your poetic work, dear Damian! Fear as lover is an impressive and convincing personification. Like a lover, fear can accompany us until it becomes part of us. Your talent from a young age on is undeniable. Great work, my friend!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You hit the nail on the head with your commentary, it was one of my better ideas I’ll admit. Thank you for your continued support my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The darkness is shown, but it’s the kind of darkness that fills the silence and quietness after a sweep of pain. there is numbness and there is the teenage intense feelings and his mind, the mind that feels that no one understands him. This reminds me with Nirvana.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Light. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You are so spot on with that analysis, I really enjoyed your commentary and feedback my friend. I felt all those things you mentioned in my life when I penned this one. Appreciate you.
Damian
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There are those who say we have to overcome our fear. I contend that it serves a purpose…and we move despite it. I will shamelessly admit that life has left me half terrified of my own shadow. But I’m still chugging along and doing the things. This was a brilliant piece. I’m not sure I would call it dark though. Maybe smudged around the edges? First poem? Damn, my friend…
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I do think fear has a purpose as well. I’m an overly cautious human myself, I don’t seek out confrontation, in fact I try to avoid it. But sometimes it is necessary to face one’s fears. Maybe a little grey around the edges. lol. It was definitely one of the first, if not number one. Appreciate you.
Damian
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“hoping you still see something redeemable in me” That is powerful, crimsin
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hello beautiful Fia thank you graciously I appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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Magnificent write Brenda. The sadness of this piece lured me in.
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thank you graciously dearest Keith for the love on this ❤️
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Brilliantly penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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As I read I am “tumbling through the centuries” with you. A ghost, witnessing with no power to save. Your writing never disappoints, fantastic piece!
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Read MoreThere is a story about two birds.They sat on a wire,they chirped all day.They flied together night and day. When the sky cast shadows and clouds.They protect eachother from the background noise.The storms and the dark voice in their heads. One...
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a very interesting tale most birds mate for life human birds do not sadly and will sometimes get bored and fly away…great write ❤️
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Read MoreI. The Symbolic Foundation ~~ In the Beginning ~~ ~~ The Square ~~ Stoicism Embodied ~~ This square represents his structurePeace of Mind, Passion, Purpose, Self-PreservationEach corner balances the man's world:Emotional Equilibrium, creative fire, direction, end disciplined restraintTo " stand on his square...
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this is quite beautiful in understanding of the balance between spirit, mind and body all encompassing the soul…I feel it’s calming effect in my innerself great write dearest Naajir I missed when you write like this ❤️
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Thank you Brenda. It’s been a helluva tulmoutous year and these latest vibes feels like a reset of sorts. I’m glad this one resonates with you.
Much luv
Naaj
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Brilliantly penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend, this has depth and layers brother. I dig it. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Big thx for the energy, my brother. This has indeed been a year of
introspection, humility and spiritual nuance. I’m glad this vibed with youMuch respect
Naaj
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Thank you so much for droppin in, Lady and sharing such in-depth insights.
There are more to come but will be spread out over time
Always deeply appreciate you indeedNaaj
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Fantastic! You have the gift of evolution, rising with your words.
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Many thanks or your thoughts on this vibe, Abbey.
Streamlining jaggedness is the constant task of any poet.
Much appreciated.Naaj
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NAAJIR wrote a new post
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Read MoreThere indeed comes a time When a man must stop running from himselfThis manifesto is a call for every man of tribe and faith To return to their CovenantTo live by principle and balance...hence The Covenant of Alignment The Covenant of ResponsibilityThe Covenant of MasteryThe Covenant...
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Powerfully penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend, dig this brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Huge thx or your thoughts on this one bro.
More to come for sure in this laneMuch respect
A Devout Humanist
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Thank you or the support, hun
I deeply appreciate itMuch respect
A Devout Humanist
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Soul excavation and spiritual reset. That’s how this reads to me. You’ve never been one to shy away from your shadows.
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Reconciliation, redemption and restitution…words from a much earlier poem [circa 2012]
that stayed with me and laid the foundation for this vibe. You have always gotten me, Willow
And I am forever appreciative.Much respect
Naaj
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I can hear the ring of youthful sorrow, for sure. Even then your writing was excellent, my friend. Talent is apparently timeless.