This shows the hurt in friendships that you weren’t even sure you wanted in the first place.

This is very good.

Love this, very powerful.

I like it….sad but honest.
🙏

A heart-touching write!

OMG… you died…

Powerfully penned, Meg. Pulls at the heartstrings my friend, incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

DEAD CLIMAX….

Macabre ‘n cold, necrophiliac’s art,
bizarre love-making to an unbeating heart.
Mutuality is most that it lacks …
thus, it always ends in a “dead climax.”

See, Megan,
How pervertedly alluring you stimulate my warped poetic senses? Heehee-HEEE!👺😈

From the span of scrumptiously lip-lickingly erotic tales to mournfully sad Free Verse poetry, your fantasy imbued ink never skips a beat.
One might be left wondering what unfathomably deep, magical well you draw your brilliantly imaginative scenarios from … yet, even if I had a deliciously palastable bucketful, I’m not sure I’d know what to do with them.

Of course, your artwork choice and title are sheer perfection in leading us into the atmospheric aura that follows … imagery-gorged, offset lines create continuous interest, assuring every millisecond of attention will be held from one staccato line ’til gobsmacking finalé.

Even in death you deny him the arduous warmth he always craved
Ever, enviously yours! ⁓ Rascal🥂

Thank you so much for that, SeaCat! I appreciate the read!

I know one thing
I wouldn’t be flaccid around you

Unusual vulnerability and I love that

BIG LIKE

Nicely penned… flows so well… great sustained rhyme…

Powerful work. Tremendous

Brilliant storytelling, Meg. Appreciate you.

Damian

Once again, Megan🎖

Mystery, excitement, hardcore, tender … whatever/whenever perfection in a scenario demands, your pen seems to instinctively command visual diction with the stroke of a master artist’s brush.

You continually assure us of your raconteuric skills on any level in every theme, breathing life into the utmost sensual or deeply erotic scene, to characters’ personalities that take on verisimilitude as though we could reach out and touch them, smell their breath, feel their heat, actually hear the emotional timbre in their voices, and see the colors of their eyes, as their pupils dilate and flex.

Simply, enviously brilliant, Lady-Author … you’re provenly the best!
How very fortunate we are you share! ⁓ Richard🖌

Richard, it’s so wonderful to have you following along with me. Your comments blow my mind. You make me so happy! Sorry for the delay in the next chapter. Hopefully this week.

xoxoxo