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NAAJIR wrote a new post
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Read MoreI'm laying in the cut Watching your butt sway beneath That red dress like a matador Enticing a predator Hawking you Silently stalking you Just thinkin how I wanna bathe my face In your private place Steadily slurp up your cinnamon syrup Stir up those feminine emotions Pledge to...
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Haha. Glad you enjoyed it, Fia
Much appreciated
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Good to see you too, hun. I’ll be trying to get back in the poetic groove and droppin in on
some of my favs startin with you. See you soon -
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Passionately penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend, preach my brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Big thx my brother. Feels good to be getting back into the groove.
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Big thx my brother. Feels good to be getting back into the groove.
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Yes, it’s steamy… but also I snort-laughed at “Rub it in my hair like Ultra Sheen” !!
You make steamy hella fun, my friend. With those fab rhymes that tickle my brain. Classic Naajir!
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Ahhhh… good to see you here K!!
Yeah that Ultra Sheen was a throwback…glad you caught that
Big thx for droppin by
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Look at you, over her causing a commotion in your corner. Just had to follow the heat signature to know it was you over here lighting fires. Got your rhythm stamp written all over this gem!
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Just reminiscing about some old school messiness…haha!
Thx for passin through hun
Deeply appreciate it!!
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Kick ass piece dude. The flow and rhymes rule!
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Big thx for the energy, bro.
Glad you dropped inMuch respect
Naaj
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keep trying beautiful poetess ❤️
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Yes I will do.
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Yes dear.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreThe Audio and Media files are being worked on. It is not a simple fix and will take time. Sorry for the inconvenience.
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I like the rhyming scheme and the poem.
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I appreciate the read and the comment, Fia. I am happy you enjoyed both!
Thank you for stopping by.
Clay
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great flow and subject matter very beautiful ❤️
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Thank you, my friend! It was a gorgeous day and place that inspired it.
I appreciate you taking the time.
Clay
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Hello, Her. You nailed it, my child-self was indeed a’visiting. It brings me true joy to know this poem was helpful for you!
You may borrow my rose-tinted glasses anytime.
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Carefree, peaceful, a joyous, tranquil vibe. Nice work.
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Thank you, Visions_of_Insanity, you captured this poem’s spirit perfectly. I keep wishing I could return to that afternoon!
I appreciate the visit
Clay
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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Read Moredeep I go and deeper stillcultivating sadness it shines inside of me why deny itsweet melancholy serenades in the shadowsquietly I play my melodymetiqulously I climb the notes into my black dintheir is cackling accompanied by whispersthe horde reside...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Thia is a deeply moving poem, Crimsin. I felt especially those last 3 line. And the music made the poem more real to me, more tragic. To desire death, yet condemned to life, where only sadness can be found. And yet, there is also the deeply felt desire to be “understood”. Crimsin, you may not want anyone in your “onyx tower”, but your poem calls to us nonetheless. Is this not an invitation to at least feel your words?
You write powerfully, Crimsin.
Curt
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hello dearest Curt of course it is I hope to move always that you got it makes me happy thank you ❤️
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Hot oil treatment..Nice line. this is steamy, will get a mind to go in all the naughty places. Nice piece