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I like the rhyming scheme and the poem.
I appreciate the read and the comment, Fia. I am happy you enjoyed both!
Thank you for stopping by.
Clay
great flow and subject matter very beautiful ❤️
Thank you, my friend! It was a gorgeous day and place that inspired it.
I appreciate you taking the time.
Clay
I loved this, the second stanza especially, so carefree and childlike. This poem made me want to leave my troubles behind and go with you.
I needed to read this poem this morning. Thank you, Detritus.
Hello, Her. You nailed it, my child-self was indeed a’visiting. It brings me true joy to know this poem was helpful for you!
You may borrow my rose-tinted glasses anytime.
Clay
Why thank you. I think I shall.
Carefree, peaceful, a joyous, tranquil vibe. Nice work.
Thank you, Visions_of_Insanity, you captured this poem’s spirit perfectly. I keep wishing I could return to that afternoon!
I appreciate the visit
Clay