Sweet descriptive piece with hints of longing

Hello John,

Your description here captures the atmosphere so perfectly. Your detail is always so razor sharp. Nice work.

Beautifully penned, John. Phenomenal imagery my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Your poem puts me in the mood of sailing and travel, the image of a sailor who is watching and expressing the scenes, keeping it in his head because soon it will only be a memory. There is sadness going along all the lines. Emotionally written.

Tremendous work. Powerful writing.

Inspiration can come from many places, but to be able to create something like this is exceptional, John. Great poem with creative images. 🙂

You forgot a birthday. Well, it looks like you made up for it. lol

Sam, I hope you’ve learned your lesson! Maybe invest in a calendar? Lol, God forbid you forget an anniversary. 😉 Great read, just enough to get the blood pumping.

xx ~P.G💋

Hoi hoi
Love this one a lot. Really good write.
The corners of my mouth have a will of their own and keep on turning up.

Did you ever considerate writing a song to the accompaniment of slamming doors?
If you are not going to do it, I will.
Well, honestly someone’s got to do it huh?

I’ll be on the look out for your next.
Kind regards, Gus

That story sure illustrates a great way to show forgiveness.

im sorry… I hope that heightened sense of arousal didn’t get you in trouble. ill go hide somewhere so you dont find me

Wow! That was a very sensual reminiscence. You really brought the imagery here

Hoi hoi

Wow! If this isn’t a declaration of love, I don’t know what is.
What a beautiful write!
A great thing you posted it!

Kind regards, Gus

I enjoy writing about this type of memory. Thanks for reading! Always grateful for your visits and comments.

Loss of innocence written with impressionist imagery that captivate me as I read. Very well done indeed.

John

Exceptional ink my friend .. thank heaven for memories eh & of course for poetry .. Neville 😎👍