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Thank you so much Fia! 🙏🏻
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This is an amazing accomplishment, my friend. All of the references to technology, and the way you use them is like candy — so sweet and perfect. I just want to stop for a moment and admire phrases like, “We’re floppy disks in the age of air,” or, “The signal fades like a VHS tape,”and so many others. So beautiful in so many ways: the words, the music all meld into a magical achievement. Why the hell aren’t you famous?
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Thank you FlatDaddy! I wanted to write something fun and light. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
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Enjoyed it? I jumped up and kissed the screen! Okay, I didn’t do that, but I could have. Just marvelous work.
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Cleverly penned, Drieks. Amazing lyrics my friend loved the technological wordplay. Excellent work as always with the arrangement. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian 🙏🏻
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FD said I had to come, listen/read your words. I am so glad I did. Loved the word play, the technology references, damn, the whole song. Many snaps and a bag of chips!!!
Curt
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Hey there Curt! Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot to me 🙏🏻
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Superb work. Powerful.
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Thank you for your kind words Thomas!
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Read MoreI burn with frost, a freezing flame A blaze that chills but feels the same I melt the ice to make a spark Yet leave the wood forever dark My heat is cold, my light is numb A fire that makes the senses dumb I...
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It’s so cold it burns. The rhyme scheme is excellent.
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Thanks Fia..appreciate the comment..appreciate you reading
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This sounds so good. Your writing is amazing.