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Read MoreWhat the hell is this place?Elitist PsychotherapyPseudo Science sorceryInto the beyondWhat's the shape of her rage?Psychoplasmic therapyAnother Theater of PainFamily Tree Reborn Beaten to death, covered in bloodThey came without warning Demonic cratures uncagedManifest through inner rageDeformed children retaliateHammer Smashes FaceRabid...
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Thank you Fia. Appreciate it
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man.
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Read MoreI am the silence that can shoutA whisper loud, a voice withoutI speak in hush that shakes the airA thunder clothed in quiet prayerNo walls contain the echo's flightIt dances through the edge of nightUnheard by ears, yet deeply...
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I can hear & feel this piece loud & clear. Great write.
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Thank you for reading and commenting
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Read MoreI am a lighthouse in the sandNo ships to guide, no sea, no landMy beam reveals what isn't thereMirages lit by vacant airI shine for eyes that never seeA signal lost in memoryMy warnings echo through the dustWhere hope...
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Dark, sad. Great piece of poetry here.
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Cool piece. Lighthouses are an imposing structure.
You can’t miss them unless you are in the trenches!
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Thanks for reading..trying to write about something different from my norm..a different level of thought invoking..thank you both for commenting
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Read MoreBeacon of AbsenceI am a lighthouse in the sandNo ships to guide, no sea, no landMy beam reveals what isn't thereMirages lit by vacant airThe Loud WhisperI am the silence that can shoutA whisper loud, a voice withoutI speak...
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
Dawn shows you were a p…Read More2 Comments-
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Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More
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Thank you
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This has unbidden murderous intent. This is a good piece