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Read MoreStretching and reaching for the headboardTrying to wake my mind from the dreamHearing a voice say“Stay right there. I want to taste your morning cream.”The timber of the voiceThe scent of cedar woodAs if I had a choiceI am...
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Thank you, Crimsin ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Fia. Incredible wordplay, with a stellar flow, and amazing imagery. This write was fire my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian ❤️
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Tremendous. Hot work. Sensual.
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Thank you, Thomas ❤️
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![Profile picture of Sappho (Elke)]()
Perfectly written, dear Fia! Very sensual and arousing! I agree absolutely to your conclusion; good sex has never been a cure for difficult relationships and will never be!
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Thank you, Sappho❤️
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Oh,my. Thank you Hj❤️
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Superb work.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you graciously sometimes I wonder if my writes aren’t strange but you have to go as inspired I’m happy this spoke to you 💕
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WHEN I SAY I FELT THIS, IT MEANS
I THIS EVERY EVERY WORD OF YOUR VOICE…BUT THIS RIGHT HERE, OOUUFF!“truthfully I fail in this mission every day
with small steps forward
becoming the companion that was first desired”DAMN IT WOMAN!
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that didn’t come out right, emotionally everywhere but you know what mean, ha!
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest poet thank you graciously good evening I wasn’t sure how this one would be accepted I’m so happy it spoke to you 💕 and yes I think your comment was great and I understood 😊
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. I think it’s something everybody fails at, myself included. It’s not meant to be easy, and sometimes are human nature gets the best of us. Very introspective write my friend. I can relate. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian for understanding I hate like for example when I am short tempered I have to work on this 💕
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The night is also when the pain hits for me. I don’t know how it is for others but the older I get the more painful life becomes. More stressful and overwhelming. Guess getting help would be best, but I’m kinda the strong one that holds up my little world. No time for breakdowns.
*Hug* you’re not alone, friend.
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hello dearest Nick good morning I think as we get older because for one thing I know I was fearless and careless when I was younger..now I am careful and cautious understanding each moment is important thank you for the love here hugs on our shared pain in the night 💕
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write as always my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
good morning Damian I hope you have a beautiful day thank you my friend 💕
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Vivid and sharp.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Thomas good evening thank you graciously have a great night 💕
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Hoi hoi
There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
Very nice write. Thank you!
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hello good morning dearest Gus I wasn’t writing yesterday and that line kept coming to mind just one line so I sat down and wrote it I’m happy it held your interest and you liked it great eye 💕
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This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!
Daniel
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Daniel thank you graciously for the love on this write 💕it is deeply appreciated…
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Damian thank you pardon my tardy response I appreciate you 💕
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
Nice rhythm love the joker in batman creation
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Joker, is pure madness. lol. Funny enough the first two lines came from lyrics to an old song that J.J. Burton and I wrote together. The rest of the words weren’t up to par. But always loved those first two lines. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Welcome to Gotham.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Welcome to Gotham, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Alexandria]()
Why so serious? Lol 🃏
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Such an iconic Joker line. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s not really about the Joker, to be truthful. The first two lines are from an old song that was just a silly song that J.J. Burton and I penned the words to in like 1993. But I always liked the first two lines, so I just wrote something else to them. He mentioned the Joker because he was a fan, and I just used that to make the first two lines. lol. A little backstory for you, I always ramble on. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian I really liked this one I guess the joker would kind of be Lucifer always laughing at peoples pain really your poem rocks as they do anyway 💕
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I think the joker could be Lucifer, but I was also thinking that darker side we all have inside. Really it could apply to any form of a personal demon, different to each person. Sorry for rambling. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Fantastic work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Nick DC]()
The first thought I have is a person or boss egging you on while you struggle.or just being smug. Laughing at your pain kinda thing.
Great ink, friend
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s also a possibility, it could kinda be that person that’s a thorn in my side. Great commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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As usual, I may be reading this wrong. But I’m feeling a sense of apathy is just as deadly as hate/evil. Those who don’t speak up for others, give their silence as a voice to the bullies. It definitely has my mind going, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see that, you always have cool insight to the meaning, always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello beautiful Fia this is sexy I’m only a switch when I write otherwise I’m completely submissive 💕