D minor is like most minor chords a wee bit sad.I like diminished chords which kind of fit between sadness and happiness.

Good write dude.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Peter. Glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve always liked D minor, Neil Young wrote quite a few. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is something different from what I have been reading here. I like it.

hello dearest Damian that refrain about not knowing whose real and being an opening for the headliner really struck my I could feel the emotion there this is powerful 💕

Tremendous work, my friend.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Patricia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I can hold my own, and am always exposing truth. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write. Thank you for the compliment. Really means a lot to me. I love your take my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. Glad you enjoyed the read my friend. Nothing wrong with opening, you played that’s what matters. Appreciate you.

Damian

Cool piece Damian. Love the D minor chord.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Appreciate you.

Damian

Wonderful write Damian. Excellent piece

Simply beautiful…

Tremendous work.

Sensual grit filled with the velvet fire of two people enmeshing. You write with the talent of a gifted poet. Loved this.

John

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Would definitely read this at the beach under the sunset! Nice write ✍️ 👌 👍 👏

Lovely piece my friend. Your words shine beautifully.

Well done Damian… nice tight rhyme

Tight ink Have a great day!!

Bat

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you enjoyed the write. Yes, sometimes the song is enough, and there’s not always need for all the pomp & circumstance. Appreciate you.

Damian

Damian here you have proved with great virtuosity that less is more. This is a tightly crafted poem that puts me in the scene. I could see the club with my very own visualization. Very well done.

John

Well said, beautifully penned.

Tight, clean, and atmospheric. The groove comes through in the writing.