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Read MoreShe’s got cardboard tears They fall from her face She’s got plastic emotions She turns them on and off She is energy efficient She has glass eyes She sees blindly, selectively She has smartphone instinct I love to hear the sound she makes When she short circuits herself For...
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Cool. Glad you enjoyed this piece. I hate plastic people. Thanks Damian.
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Love this piece. I’ve met a few people like this. Where it’s like there’s nothing in that head haha.
Wonderful ink
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Appreciate it Nick. Thanks!!
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I like how you describe yourself a person who writes at night and looks deeper than most to get the core of things.
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Powerful work.
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Life of a writer, LDF. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Morei will embrace deathwith open armsslowly losing my breathfleeing from all harmsend me on my waylet’s march to the gravetake my meaningless life awaythere’s nothing left to save what is the meaning of lifeto live is to die marching to the...
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We’re all marching to the grave. Great piece my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. We are heading that way, but this was written in the angst of my teenage world. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The seventeen-year-old you were going through it. This is really good to be penned at 17
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I went through it many times in this life, but the teenage angst in me always went for the jugular. lol. Well, 17 year old me smiled inside, and said thank you. He never thought he was the bees knees if you know what I mean. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Superb work. Powerful.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Shades of the future Damian DeadLove. 🔥
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Teenage angst sometimes made up for the lack of experience I had when it came to writing back then. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Pretty deep thought for a 17yo to be considering the inevitability of death. Seems the art of poetry & philosophy started young for you. In my experience the general emo trends of the 90’s facilitated my poetic curiosity. It’s fun to read my own teenage writes but I’ve not been brave enough to share from that far back even with editing. 😝 ha! I didn’t have your level of skill at 17, though. Kudos!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Ruby. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I was pretty angry at the world at 17, not that my attitude has improved much since those days, as far as the world is concerned. I started at 14 or 15 yrs old. I would turn 18 a couple of months after writing this one. I started out trying to write Hair Metal lyrics, they were horrible and I would never share them with anyone. We all start somewhere, Ruby. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you dig the lyrics my friend. I just realized today that I was better than I gave myself credit for, I’m my own worst critic. lol. I think all writers are that way though, we hold ourselves to our own high standards. My biggest problem was I never took time to appreciate what I was doing, that’s something maturity brings for sure. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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From our first breath until the last, we’re marching to the grave. But what we do in the interim…ah, that’s where it gets interesting. I did a quick math check & it tells me that I am only 5 years older than you. I remember these feelings at that age. A friend once told me “Girl, you do morbid so well!” Even at 17 you had vision & rhythm. And the evolution was so worth the journey to who you are, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with these old lyrics my friend. No way, everybody used to say that about me as well. I was morbid or dark, because I questioned authority or why us humans do what we do. Glad to know I wasn’t alone my friend. You’re much too kind, but it’s nice to hear anyhow. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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M.E and
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Read MoreA woman named Bo N. Herr decided to open her doorShe needed tampons & batteries at the local store She decided to walk, it was a gorgeous spring dayHer period was heavy, she was in a lot of pain Why she...
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OMG, Dixon Butts. I’m sure there will be more names like that in future works.
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Thanks Pinkdreams. Appreciate the read & comments.
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Damn! I forgot about the 9th.
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Will do. Thanks my friend for the read & comments.
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Hallmark could file litigation my friend. lol. Are you still pissed they didn’t give you a job? lol. This was crude but funny. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Everywhere I go they turn me down. Thanks Damian.
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He missed the shot?? How do you miss the shot? lol this is so funny. Nice one
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Glad you enjoyed this piece. Thanks Fia.
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Haha very romantic.
Great ink
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Thanks man. Appreciated.
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Brilliantly penned, Keith. Into the book it belongs! Flawless victory.. lol. I had to say it. Incredible write my friend. Plastic people are the worst. Appreciate you.
Damian