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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreSee hope Where there is despair See warmth where there is coldness see the tides change subtle but with strength When one says they are fine See the truth Confusion has clouded the mind and practice smiles can fool the best proficient optimist Off into the horizon Where two blues meet Darkness...
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Thank you Styxian:))
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Great thoughtful writing Fia.
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Thank you Peter;)
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write with lots of deep layers my friend. Nicely done. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian;)) cuz
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
This does have a positive feel to it.
You never know, sometimes acknowledging someone who’s struggling could impact their day in a positive way.
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Thank you Adel;))
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I think that too often people know it’s a mask, but they want to believe it’s reality. Because having to see what makes them uncomfortable is more than they’re willing to take on. So we paste on the smile and say we’re fine, and they eagerly choose to believe it so they don’t have to acknowledge the truth. I love that the message in this is to see beyond the surface
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Perfect ending. Say it again so I can hear how wrong the recount is. Very realistic and draws you into the moment.
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Read MoreYEAR: 52028 SHIP: Matriark II, Super-frigate exploration Class LOCATION: Purple Mountain Valley, North of the Landing site. Professor Adam’s Earpiece Log DAY EIGHT They have taken me back to the surface. Something is wrong. The Pond Apes are screaming. All of the Ruki...
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Ten out of ten
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I’ll take it! I don’t do many rhymers much anymore, some are older that I edit a bit. But, I wanted something in here that is a strong message for the testament to love, etc. Thanks Peter.
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This is so good. I mean,,,I love the flow of it
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![Profile picture of Styxian]()
Hey Fia! I hear you may meet up with Del next month! What! That’s awesome!
I do have a slight burp in the meter in a couple of lines. But I didn’t see a quality edit that I liked, when I tinkered with it. So it stays. I was following the path of action and result moreso, in the progression, so the meter has to have a burp to maintain what i wanted to say. Yeah?
Thank you for the positive vibes!
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Beautifully penned, Mark. Another excellent write with clever wordplay and outstanding storytelling my friend. I concur with Fia, it has a rhythm and a flow to it. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I know you love to rhyme, so I actually had that in mind when posting it. I mean, I can, but it’s harder for me because I lean more towards a storybook approach nowadays. Good or bad, it’s what I feel comfortable doing.
I appreciate it, Damian. Rhyme on!
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Talk about manifesting…this is a solid BOOM in the way of rhythm, movement, and expression. And here y’all are now…still living that hoped for day. 😊
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I like a boom ! Who doesn’t. LOL. I know this write has a slight question of aggressive undertones at the beginning. I actually reworded it to calm the idea that it was a forceful thing. But, I wanted to capture the feeling of angst and impatience, so hopefully that is what is seen.
Thank you Willow. Me and Del are hanging in there, with our long distance relationship. We do get together four or five times a year, depending on work schedules, etc. One day I will be there permanently, probably less than a year. No, for sure!
It’s worth the wait. We are a great couple!
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I was smiling so much reading this that my heart ached!
You are everything I hoped you’d be plus more.
I also remember this picture! You used it on DUP too!How blessed I feel at this moment, so many years later.
Remembering all the darkest of nights
and the glow of every early morning
Together bound in a discovery of words
Describing how you completely loved me:)Love you!!
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I love you.
We took a huge chance, huh. Especially you, flying for the first time!
I dunno, baby, I just knew it was special. You are rare! Writing is a window, whether we mean to open it or not. And I am a great reader. From our messages, then emails, then video calls, then in person, it all went so smooth and natural. Because it was meant to be.
We deserve happiness. And true love. You are incredible.
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Thank you Tim. I don’t mess with rhyming ones much anymore. But when I do, I want them to be as good as I can make them. I appreciate it when someone lets me know that the efforts are worth it.
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A fire of feeling. Great write.
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Thank you James. I do enjoy creative writing, and hopefully it shows in my results. As the same for you, quality in your words as well.
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Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
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Read MoreSomebody is always tryingto give me something.A gift wrapped in bitterness,a box full of lunacy,a package of somebody else'stroubled mindwith my name written on it.Sometimes they hand it to mewith a smile.Sometimes they throw it at me.Sometimes they call...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Thomas. Another excellent write with outstanding storytelling my friend. Clever wordplay throughout this one. I can relate. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, I appreciate you.
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
This right here is a perfect expression of boundaries. Taking on the chaos of others can be exhausting. Hell, dealing with our own chaos is exhausting.
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Thank you so much, Willow.
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I love that you chose a positive message to write of. There is never enough of that. So thank you! And the write is well crafted, full of inspiring lines to lift the reader up. Great idea and great result, Fia.