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Thank you Damian 😊
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It’s a beautiful thing when minds sync on one purpose. Your closing line couldn’t define it better!
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Thank you, Kelly;))
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Sweetly sung as whispers. A hint of seductive word play without being graphic. I like the subtlety. Leave the reader to build their own visions as they read. Well crafted Fia.
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Thank you, you know I can be “in your face” with the graphics. But I can tone it down as well.;))
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Thank you, Hj xx
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Nicely done, Fia. Your romantic side is showing. 🙂
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(giggling) I can be romantic. Thank you, Tim;))
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🙂 I’ll bet you can.
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I am keeping all this romance together.;))
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Superb and sensual. Excellent.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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Nicely done, Fia, but it seems to need just a bit of punctuation to help with the flow, I wasn’t sure at first how to read it, stopping after each line, then going, “Oh, I see it now.” Nice work.
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Thank you, FlatDaddy;))
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You can beat an egg and a drum and a carpet .. and a few other things besides .. but you just can’t beat a bit of sync now can ya eh’ .. Very much enjoyed the ride Fia .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you, Neville;))
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Hold on we have to go back to the beginning, we will return on your tightness
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Thank you, Me;))
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Fia, this read like an erotic encounter of a bewitchingly soft yet libidinal ambrosia. There is magic here that takes me into the heart of the poem. I could feel the silken sheets and that last line has to be the most original and brilliant ending “liquid ambrosia”.
John
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I wanted it be soft. Thank you
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Read MoreStatic radio gives me the shakesSensitive to light, my belly achesRed holes infected my suspicious legGreen water mucus as baby Jesus loves to beg Pill popping dope creates a milk dud of a manThe white swans turn black, sacrifice the...
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That’s frikin awesome ⭐
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Thanks man. Appreciate the comment.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This write has layers my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Glad you enjoyed Damian. Thanks!!
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It reads like a song. I enjoy the lyrical quality and the way the rhyme and cadence propel the reader through this brutal inventory of sickness and despair. It has the perfect structure for a darkly beautiful rock ballad.
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Cool. Love the description you wrote. Thanks Romaj.
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This is brilliant, dear Keith – the imagery, the use of opposites and the meaningful words! The end of September is the beginning of a new and pretty dark season. Yes it is all letting go, decay and death. But nature shows us how to die with dignity and grace. Birth and death belong to the same circle of life. Hope guides us through the valley of shadows until we reach the light again.
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A lovely comment Elke. Thank you.
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I love nursery rhymes. Waiting for more!
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Thanks Paulo. You rock!
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Read MoreYou take me to a dream of nonsensical promisesOf rainbows and diamonds falling from the skyA kiss placed strategically on the browScreams of hidden thoughts and wants Why should we not indulge in a dreamAllow liberties and fanciful playOnce awakened...
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This is whimsical with beautiful wording throughout, Fia. Really nice work. 🙂
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Thank you, Tim;)) <3
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I felt instantly swept into a pure, sensuous dream. Every line is brimming with color, desire, and such a playful, intoxicating energy. It’s more than a cocktail; it’s a feast for the senses.
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Thank you, Romaj…It’s a feast for the senses…appreciate that;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! I love the playful nature of this write my friend. Excellent! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Nice work Fia. You’re a wonderful poet!
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Thank you so much, Vision
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Incredible write my friend, really like this a lot. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian