- Let Me Serve You (Softly Erotic)
- The Real Taste of Liqour
- No More X’s and O’s
- Drift
- We’ll Meet on the Thames
- Intoxicated
- To seduce Me, seduce my Mind
- Twin Flame? NA Not Applicable
- Night Joining
- If We Could Only…
- My Obsession
- If I should die 3 x’s, then so be it
- Ambrosia
- Poetic Voyeur
- We Delve
- Waiting
The cool crisp white sheets
used to be inviting
When thoughts of how they will
cool the skin after your touch
Reminiscing about nights filled with
soft flickering candle lights
Dancing to stay on the wick
When I accidentally bumped into the nightstand
Now I wait till the ring connects
Till words are spoken into my ear
Low and wanting
Urging for a different type of glow
Tonight, our minds sync on a purpose
On one goal
Liquid Ambrosia
Beautifully penned, Fia. Incredible write my friend, really like this a lot. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
Thank you Damian 😊
It’s a beautiful thing when minds sync on one purpose. Your closing line couldn’t define it better!
Thank you, Kelly;))
Sweetly sung as whispers. A hint of seductive word play without being graphic. I like the subtlety. Leave the reader to build their own visions as they read. Well crafted Fia.
Thank you, you know I can be “in your face” with the graphics. But I can tone it down as well.;))
Well, I loved it, Fia. Harriet-Jacqui xx
Thank you, Hj xx
Nicely done, Fia. Your romantic side is showing. 🙂
(giggling) I can be romantic. Thank you, Tim;))
🙂 I’ll bet you can.
I am keeping all this romance together.;))
Superb and sensual. Excellent.
Thank you, Thomas;))
Nicely done, Fia, but it seems to need just a bit of punctuation to help with the flow, I wasn’t sure at first how to read it, stopping after each line, then going, “Oh, I see it now.” Nice work.
Thank you, FlatDaddy;))
You can beat an egg and a drum and a carpet .. and a few other things besides .. but you just can’t beat a bit of sync now can ya eh’ .. Very much enjoyed the ride Fia .. Neville 😎👍
Thank you, Neville;))
Hold on we have to go back to the beginning, we will return on your tightness
Thank you, Me;))
Fia, this read like an erotic encounter of a bewitchingly soft yet libidinal ambrosia. There is magic here that takes me into the heart of the poem. I could feel the silken sheets and that last line has to be the most original and brilliant ending “liquid ambrosia”.
John
I wanted it be soft. Thank you