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Read MoreYou opened the door,a spill of light illuminating you from behind—the soft blue of your pajamascatching the glow, tracing every quiet detail of you. A chill had whispered through the air,and I saw the way your body listened—a quiet shiver,a tightening,a...
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Thanks Fia!
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Great writing and images. Love it.
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Glad you enjoyed it, Tim!
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Perfect imagery…..at least in my head.
Great write.👍
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In my head too! Thanks for stopping by, Peter.
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Superb work.
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Thanks Thomas!
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Nice. How many of us have written of such a view! Your version is wonderfully attentive without being overtly sexual. It’s about the simplicity of the beautiful construct of her anatomy. Admiration.
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Thank you for such a kind review, Styxian.
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Read MoreIt isn’t solitude that killsbut loneliness.Not the want of company,but the ache left by thosewho once knew your silenceswho once saw into your soul. You can stand in a room bursting with laughter and still feel no touch of being...
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent fucking write my friend. This has layers and I dig layers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreWhen calloused hands touch skinShivers cascade throughNot wanting to break the spellFelt as if this moment was meant for youLooking into the depths of blacknessSeeing the care and wantWant to remove all the sadnessUnderstanding flows through that I can’tSeconds...
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What a lovely piece of writing Fia. Great rhymes, outstanding flow.
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Thank you. Appreciate that. been a busy week for me
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nothing wicked about this, but the sadness of it hits home here.
you display strength and insight.
thanks for sharing.
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Thank you, Jim;))
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Yes a little sad but we think of life as a little calloused and the piece fits. Tight
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Thank you, ME;))
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Chère F.,
My heart jumps up a little, when I see you’ve posted one of your beautiful writes.
And this one is a wake up call for me. I’ve never given much thought about my hands as is done here.
It reminds me to work harder in my allotment garden.
An allotment garden on the edge of Amsterdam? Some people have all the luck huh?Great poem.
I’ll be looking out for the next one.
Warm regards, Gus-
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Thank you, Gus😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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While the reader can not fail to get the message that both runs throughout and underpins this epic post, the penultimate and summative lines are surely to die for .. Write on sister F .. Neville 😎🌻👍
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Thank you, Neville 😊
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Such a bittersweet piece. The ache and yearn…and the stepping back. Totally felt
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Thank you, Willow 😊
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This is some vivid, intense scenery you painted here, Fia
Your words flowed very well for my eyes to follow and my mind to absorb.
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Thank you Naaj:))
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Magnificently sensual and breathtakingly passionate. I could feel this encounter unfold through your vivid and powerful telling that brought me into the depths of the hearts of these lovers. And that closing with the calloused hand withdrawing made for an ending to be remembered, my friend.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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Damian DeadLove and
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Could feel the hurt in your words my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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An awesome, bittersweet and heart touching poem, dear Crimsin! Brilliantly written!
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Most excellent, my friend. Keep on touching my heart.
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How is it fair to find the perfect one so long after finding your one true love, is it fate showing a sense of humor, Tight
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Brilliant
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Beautiful. Only you can write these sad pieces with such delicate precision.
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That damn wind told her secret. This is good. I enjoyed it