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    Truth's a Mirror

    Can we all agree to disagree on what the world thinks of you and meStop being silent on the inside while burning on the outside for the whole world to see Anger arises from weak mindsEye-opening deaths provoke hate crimesDo...

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    • hello dearest Drieks this is one of your best in my opinion the climate out there is daunting… it worries me everyday I’m too old to change things in the eighties when I was young it was all about the money I don’t know if things have changed great write ❤️

      • Thank you Crimsin ❤️ I wrote most of this piece years ago and it saddens me that nothing has changed. If anything, it has gotten worse. I really appreciate your kind words.

    • The opening line= “Can we agree to disagree” I gave you head nod on that. This is so beautiful.

    • Thank you so much 💕
      I hope to keep expressing myself through this medium for a long time. And I’ll never forget who to thank for it 😉

    • You’re writing some very strong pieces Lady that are truly depicting that status of our current world. Please continue pushing your powerful words Lady

    • Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent write, you’re a gifted lyricist my friend. Love the choice of Reggae to paint the background for your amazing words my friend. Such a truthful message about the state of the world. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Hey Damian! Can you believe I spent hours fitting these lyrics to punk rock??
        And then my sister was listening to a reggae song on her phone and that changed my mind instantly. I personally love the way it sounds as it is now.

        Thank you for your kind words Damian. I won’t forget your support.

    • Another strong piece, my friend. I am so glad Her introduced us. I listen to you often (I even read the words! — and they are alway truthful and necessary).

      I am so glad your sister wasn’t listening to a polka; this song would have a very different vibe. Brrr!
      FD

    • This is fantastic. Keep on, keeping on.

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    sexual

    flesh divine... slippery feelings astound metasting the dark I squirmpleasing the need I deemit is with much pleasure I introduce myselfa Vixen, salacious with desiretalk to me plainly it's orgasm you want to achievemy lips whisper to your ardorrising...

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    divinity

    imitating mortal lifebecause I only know the divinewhispering secrets to my bosomwords of wisdomcareless thoughts of uneasemy wandering soul wonders of the nature of thingsmy mind flows with thoughtsuntil I close my eyesrefusing to see what isbut for a...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • thank you graciously dearest Damian I know this one is out there but it is as I think I appreciate the love here ❤️

    • You have a rare talent, the talent to write about dark in a beautiful and kind way… the darkness that we all have inside but few dare to explore, not the darkness of “evil” no no no… the darkness of pain, of loss, of hurt, of questioning…etc… that part of You which You alone seem to touch, know and feel🤍 This is very special, profound and moving not the senses but the inners. Spectacular💖

      • hello dearest Light thank you graciously your comment really moved me I can only share what I feel sometimes feeling odd about it… it feels good to get such a lovely reception ❤️

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    Haunted

    A single tear drops
    Haunted by her lost lover
    Will always love him

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    • Halloween may be over, Fia 👻

      But, you’ve learned the trick of keeping the ghostly treat of love’s forever haunting passion vibrantly alive, and what better than a beautifully laid Senryu to share it all with us in such a sweet way … maybe, a lover’s spell will be cast, returning “him” to your warming, tear-filled heart and arms.

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    first son with the talented Adagio

    Grim was her mood as she storms about,Fetid feelings abound.Her secrets kept none to confide in,Her love scorn her affections,Leaving her with a derelict affliction.   Cursed among maidens,Her future was bleak and barren,Like all that came before her.She was a...

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