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You’re writing some very strong pieces Lady that are truly depicting that status of our current world. Please continue pushing your powerful words Lady
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent write, you’re a gifted lyricist my friend. Love the choice of Reggae to paint the background for your amazing words my friend. Such a truthful message about the state of the world. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey Damian! Can you believe I spent hours fitting these lyrics to punk rock??
And then my sister was listening to a reggae song on her phone and that changed my mind instantly. I personally love the way it sounds as it is now.Thank you for your kind words Damian. I won’t forget your support.
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Another strong piece, my friend. I am so glad Her introduced us. I listen to you often (I even read the words! — and they are alway truthful and necessary).
I am so glad your sister wasn’t listening to a polka; this song would have a very different vibe. Brrr!
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Crimsin wrote a new post
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Chère C.,
Are you getting better every day or is it my imagination?
I’d welcome both…Lovely! Painting with Words.
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You have a rare talent, the talent to write about dark in a beautiful and kind way… the darkness that we all have inside but few dare to explore, not the darkness of “evil” no no no… the darkness of pain, of loss, of hurt, of questioning…etc… that part of You which You alone seem to touch, know and feel🤍 This is very special, profound and moving not the senses but the inners. Spectacular💖
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hello dearest Light thank you graciously your comment really moved me I can only share what I feel sometimes feeling odd about it… it feels good to get such a lovely reception ❤️
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Senryu
HauntedA single tear drops
Haunted by her lost lover
Will always love him-
Halloween may be over, Fia

But, you’ve learned the trick of keeping the ghostly treat of love’s forever haunting passion vibrantly alive, and what better than a beautifully laid Senryu to share it all with us in such a sweet way … maybe, a lover’s spell will be cast, returning “him” to your warming, tear-filled heart and arms.
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hello dearest Drieks this is one of your best in my opinion the climate out there is daunting… it worries me everyday I’m too old to change things in the eighties when I was young it was all about the money I don’t know if things have changed great write ❤️