Brilliantly penned, P.G. Incredible chapter my friend, you’re a natural storyteller. You sure this is your first time writing stories in this format? lol. Love the character development as well. Appreciate you.

Damian

Keith, you rock! I appreciate you and your kind words as always my friend. Just wait, it gets better.

xx

~P.G💋

You go Camryn. Do not take that tone. lol
I am enjoying this story a lot and I know a lot of Italian-American people who have that Jersy accent. Love the imagery.

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such a powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

the quiet voices of angels. Well done. ❤️

thank you graciously dearest Keith ❤️

Powerfully penned, PAR. Incredible write my friend. You never disappoint, thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you my dear friend.

Beautiful ink.
Thank you for sharing.

Thanks Keith, sometimes it’s good to let it be harsh.

Funny immediately I thought of the Diddy trial that is going on. This is a strong poem and makes you take pause. Nice. ;))

Mic Drop!

You nailed it.

I can read the morrison vibes in these verses. A well written Ode! “)

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Yes, the late Val Kilmer, was able to capture the essence of Jim. He also sang all the concert footage in the film. They were revolutionary indeed. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I really loved the ending dearest Damian yes powerful words and I love and still love Jim as I shake the cotton from my brain…great write and dedication ❤️

You capture Jim very well here. Excellent work.

There was just something about artist of that time that was just magical. Great tribute.

This had the cadence of a song to it. His influence drifting through you, perhaps? What a great ode to your inspiration, my friend

Still lighting our fire ….

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