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Aldo Kraas posted in the group National Poetry Month
Don’t ask me why
I am a child of God
Don’t ask me why
I am a middle class person
Don’t ask me why
I made friends with poor people
I don’t like the rich people at
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Sam Nash wrote a new post
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Read MoreIn a cage Struggling To get outHelplessBlind to the factA BirdWithout his mindOutsideWould not surviveTo and froHe flewLookingAt the blue skyLooking For the lightNot noticingThe deadly groundsWith all its houndsHe had heardOnceAbout the outsideAbout freedomAbout the past He fought To reach outTo reach That promised...
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You are asking a 14 year old boy such difficult questions…. Remember I wrote this when I was merely 14… after so many years I still do not have an answer
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Intense read. I feel it.
Regards
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thanks James… I guess I was probably a better poet when I was 14 then I am now… getting old sucks
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Curly Grace wrote a new post
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Read MoreCome close, beneath your nearness and the warmth of my skin, until neither of us knows where one begins. Your mouth finds my neck, then pauses there, a whisper of heat caught softly in air. I feel your restraint before I feel your hand, the softest tension I can barely withstand. It...
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ooo… this is good … very sensual and intense
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Thank you, Sam. I’m glad the sensuality and intensity came through. Sometimes a little mystery makes the journey all the more interesting. 😉
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Chère G.,
Come close, a better and more inviting intro has not be written so far.
What a beauty you’ve made.And the final four sentences are the cherry on the cake.
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Gus, what a lovely thing to say. I’m so glad the opening drew you in, and the ending stayed with you. Thank you for reading so thoughtfully and for your wonderfully warm words. 🙂
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreOnline warfare being waged everyday Some tech-pimp living in a wet dream Everything on the menu is pay to play Swinging pendulum picking up steam Broken hearts corrupted by confusion Unable to see through this cold illusion Artificial beast hides without disguise Cyborg sex doll disregards...
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Well this is musing. lol
liked the people like privacy they get intrusion part really good-
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked that line as well. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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thoroughly enjoyed Damian .. & then some .. Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hellish visions. Intense feeling.
Regards
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, James. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Sometimes intense feelings guide the poem along in my experience. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A bit towards the apocalypse in its foretelling, yeah? I also get a “War Pigs” vibe as well (Black Sabbath).
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see the “War Pigs” vibe too. Sabbath has always been an influence in my creative efforts. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow, one more of your excellent, intense and thought provoking right things, dear Damien! Especially the last verse speaks to me a lot. World most people consider God as all seeing eye that is watching and judging us, all sing that UI energy is just experiencing itself, manifested and the form of a human being. So it is entirely up to us what to do with our lives. Personally, I think it is best to listen to our heart and to our intuition. Why won’t lead us a stray.
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Sorry for the typing Arrows, Damian!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. No worries about the typing errors, it happens to all of us from time to time. It is best to search for the light in all things in my opinion. Appreciate you.
Damian
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