The sense of outside, of otherness in this so so palpable. It definitely reminds me of moments when I felt on the outside looking in. I remember days when it was YOU who stopped by to reconnect me to the world. You expressed it so perfectly, Brenda 🧡

Beautiful feels, friend.

Such a beautiful poem…love the metaphors used in this lovely piece. Thanks for sharing ❤️

Willow you are a strength personified in this piece. Beautiful piece

Strong and do we say sensual or steamy? This maybe the first time we read you like this, tight

Chère W.,

Reading time Less than 1 min. A promise, a threat?
no need to dilute it for my sake. Since it’s in English, and I am intent to come to grips with the words, my reading time is less than 2 minutes. Alas…..
And I think it’s beautiful.
In fact I love your writes to bits.
And this is another one of them!

Warm regards, Gus

I like to watch people, but not in a stalker way, LOL. I am just curious in how we all are wired, and what gets out from inside our heads. Mannerisms, etc. Your piece here is a great mapquest to Willow. Not full of hype, but the nuances that make you unique. Well described, Willow.

What an amazing comment, Peter! Thank you! I try to approach erotica from a different angle 😊

Thank you so much, Thomas! I’m glad it conveyed the feelings behind the words enough to be seen. 😊

I love me some word play. And I’m not very conventional with my erotica, I guess. Thank you, bro 😊

This is the kind of poetry which I adore, I connect and bond with, I get jealous from! This is beyond beautiful my friend, beyond a very well written masterpiece, it runs deep so deep inside that it brought tears to my eyes. As much as it’s sensual and passionate as much as it bares your soul, the poetic, the wounded, the strong soul of yours, You are your poetry and how You should be treated is how Your poetry should be treated too, with care, with thoughtfulness, with feeling, with open heart and mind, those who don’t look beyond the words are not welcome. This is a sacred gem. You deserve a sky full of stars🌟🌟🌟 You are indeed special. Bless You 💜

Wow this is a different format. I enjoyed this.

Thanks Fia.
Glad you enjoyed it and that it perhaps made you smile for a while.
💋

Enjoyed this poem… beautiful descriptive piece….thanks for sharing ❤️

At times freedom is bonding. destroyed to be rebuilt. There is no phoenix rising, this is wiping the counter only to smear peanut butter on it, tight

Destroy is such a strong word! Maybe they can dismantle you, instead? 😉
Like we are jenga blocks, waiting to be a stacked fortress soon again.
Good vibes from this write, Fia. Stay whole!

Destruction can also mean new birth for the mind, body and soul.