I like it….sad but honest.
🙏

A heart-touching write!

OMG… you died…

Powerfully penned, Meg. Pulls at the heartstrings my friend, incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

DEAD CLIMAX….

Macabre ‘n cold, necrophiliac’s art,
bizarre love-making to an unbeating heart.
Mutuality is most that it lacks …
thus, it always ends in a “dead climax.”

See, Megan,
How pervertedly alluring you stimulate my warped poetic senses? Heehee-HEEE!👺😈

From the span of scrumptiously lip-lickingly erotic tales to mournfully sad Free Verse poetry, your fantasy imbued ink never skips a beat.
One might be left wondering what unfathomably deep, magical well you draw your brilliantly imaginative scenarios from … yet, even if I had a deliciously palastable bucketful, I’m not sure I’d know what to do with them.

Of course, your artwork choice and title are sheer perfection in leading us into the atmospheric aura that follows … imagery-gorged, offset lines create continuous interest, assuring every millisecond of attention will be held from one staccato line ’til gobsmacking finalé.

Even in death you deny him the arduous warmth he always craved
Ever, enviously yours! ⁓ Rascal🥂

Thank you so much for that, SeaCat! I appreciate the read!

I know one thing
I wouldn’t be flaccid around you

Unusual vulnerability and I love that

BIG LIKE

It’s true
I’ve toyed with you for years…
I felt your heat and watched you burn with desire. I was not free to act so I kept you on a string for years. You expressed your lust often.
Poetically we fucked.
Your masochism called me and while you suffered in unrequited lust you also loved every minute and the occasional 💕 I drowned you in…. It’s what people do who can’t but also can …

BIG TORRID LIKE

FORMER RL AWARD

Pretty intense!
I was transported for a few hot moments.
Thank you

Passionately penned, Brenda. Nice write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

You almost roped me in.
It can’t be a sin to feel like this.
Love the artwork too.
Great write!
Kind regards, Gus

hello dearest poet thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you 💕

Powerfully penned, Brenda. This has so many shades of depth my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I love it when you write dark poetry. It gives you “I should run” vibes

Hoi hoi
This type of dark poems are generally not my favourite, but you make it work.
The artwork makes it a bit lighter.
Like it a lot.
Kind regards, Gus

I love how deeply layered your ink is. Like I can read it multiple times and find new things. Which is something only great writes can do.

Wonderful, friend.

I adore how you sling the hash, right up my alley. Never at a lost for ink in a time zone bordering on dark.

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible storytelling my friend, with lots of layers. Phenomenal write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerful work. Tremendous

Brilliant storytelling, Meg. Appreciate you.

Damian

Once again, Megan🎖

Mystery, excitement, hardcore, tender … whatever/whenever perfection in a scenario demands, your pen seems to instinctively command visual diction with the stroke of a master artist’s brush.

You continually assure us of your raconteuric skills on any level in every theme, breathing life into the utmost sensual or deeply erotic scene, to characters’ personalities that take on verisimilitude as though we could reach out and touch them, smell their breath, feel their heat, actually hear the emotional timbre in their voices, and see the colors of their eyes, as their pupils dilate and flex.

Simply, enviously brilliant, Lady-Author … you’re provenly the best!
How very fortunate we are you share! ⁓ Richard🖌

Richard, it’s so wonderful to have you following along with me. Your comments blow my mind. You make me so happy! Sorry for the delay in the next chapter. Hopefully this week.

xoxoxo