darkness cackle within and I sigh
it would have its way
swaying in the moment I languish
a spell, a cure, was uttered under my breath
my power would return to me
dark manuevers and I am flying
sending my soul up and out
tied to the mortal coil I rebel
sinister stirrings, I cough a spirit out
it pops right out of my mouth
a newling of evil
full of potential upon forming
caress the bleak and send it reeling
it would fight for the feeling
touching the night its lips curl
and a scream formed
uttering enchantments I’m in the zone
tracking the radical movements of the darkling
hideous deed it feast
eating the infamous among us
building in reputation and strength I call it back to me
looking him in the eyes I see a flicker of doubt there
then it clicked inside me this creature has feelings
darkness bane his conscience shown
the beasty was humanlike
delving in deep I read its mind
with bitter regret he plead
let me not tarry this world is too bitter
so I sent him into the cosmos to be one with his kind
a beautiful being of hope







I love how deeply layered your ink is. Like I can read it multiple times and find new things. Which is something only great writes can do.
Wonderful, friend.
hello dearest Nick good morning thank you graciously I’m happy you could read deeper into this one I was kind of unsure of it…I struggled with the ending thank you again for showing your love here 💕
I adore how you sling the hash, right up my alley. Never at a lost for ink in a time zone bordering on dark.
hello dearest Adagio thank you graciously you could tell I was holding the dark back I appreciate you 💕
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible storytelling my friend, with lots of layers. Phenomenal write. Appreciate you.
Damian
hello dearest Damian thank you graciously my imagination sometimes gets away from me I’m happy it worked 💕