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    blush

    get a grip I tell myselfon this shadowy afternoonsitting in the shade I daydreamwith sleek thoughts of you I cravecoveteness behave, these feelings can't be understoodconvicted soul, my flesh has other ideasseeking you in the darkmy mind alters and...

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    Melting

    102 degrees does not rival what your eyes convey Trickle of sweat Parched mouth Labored breathing One more thing will sinch my demise “Baby…I miss that mouth.” I’m a puddle.

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    Contests Winners 2nd contest 2025

    Here are the links to the winners’ poems – Stars Rite

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    facets

    sinister plea I am aborted needempty in the hollowness of soulburning with the desire to be knownaching rebellion, sacred trustto be cast outfalling through the dark I screammy heart fails and I turn palemy spirit sinks and I think...

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    • Absolutely Awesome! Wow!
      The phrases I love… “Sinful Redemption” (A paradoxical escape from salvation)
      “secreting the nights away” (A novel spin from noun to verb – clandestine and furtive)
      “your truth my undoing” (The curse of understanding)

      Just an amazing piece of work, girl.

      • hello beautiful Meg good afternoon thank you graciously for such a great review 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • good afternoon dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you 💕

    • Amazing piece Crimsin!
      Razor sharp ink.

    • You’re crushing it, Brenda!!! Luvin it!!!!

      Naaj

      • hi there dearest Naajir good afternoon thank you graciously for a lovely response 💕

    • Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp.

      • hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you for such a beautiful comment 💕

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    apology

    lingers the sadness and I wonder when it will endthe blueness of feeling overwhelms my soul tries to conceal the griefbut it is emerging in my day and in my writingin the form of depressionmy days are altered and...

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    • No apologies necessary, girl. This is what writing is for. Your catharsis. Hand over your feelings. The piece is strong and moving.

      Meg

      • hello lovely Meg thank you graciously it is difficult because my feelings seem to confront me when I write there is no hiding from them… I deeply appreciate your understanding and willingness to listen my name is Brenda 💕

    • hello dearest Will thank you for the good advise I want to get past this feeling in my life and in my writing…sometimes I think I here my son asking me ma, what are you doing when I am unkind to myself…still I am grateful I had time with my son to be close to him before he died… I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕

    • Do whatever you need to do to survive…..write,cry,complain,run naked trough the streets if you have to…….just survive.

      Take care and you have friends here that care even if from the other side of the earth.

      • hello Peter good morning thank you for an understanding advise and a comment that made me smile 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. No apologies are needed, you grieve as long as you need to my friend. You’re working through your thoughts and emotions, writing is your therapy right now. I’m supportive because I also use my writing as therapy, I think it’s what writers do. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • thank you dearest Damian for being so supportive and understanding I appreciate you 💕

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