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Read MoreDeath came quickly, I remember. But not quick enough.I suffered. Suicide is painful in so many ways,to myself, to others. And for those others,deep emotional pain followedand internal scars inflicted by my selfishness!By my self-pity!By my own choice! I say this, don't do...
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That is a selfish thought/ relatable. I know people who said they would want to leave before their spouse. Especially when they have been with them a long time.
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Tremendous.
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I really like this. Sometimes I think about this sort of thing and some people just don’t get it. They think it’s weird or morbid. 😅
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hello dearest Benny I want to die first because I know my husband will be fine with me and not so much me if he died first we all have our reasons I don’t think it selfish 💕
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Thanks for your reply.
We don’t have choices in these matters and that’s a good thing.🙏
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This is sweet, and I agree with Crimsin, not truly selfish. Ideally, Lovers should be able to die at exactly the same time.
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Read More1.So now, you seek a primer—after years of painting—Without enough sanding,Drowning in the paradox of colors.2.There is enough paint in here (my heart) to fill that emptiness.I opened it like Pandora’s box.3.Armed to the teeth with brushes and rollers,Stripped...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, M.E. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian! Appreciated! “)
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Very interesting dialogue. Is this internal or external?
It is not about painting, I agree. nice work-
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External inspiration, internal conversation. 50/50 hehehe. I was painting a wall at home and using the process to write.
Thank you Fia! “)
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Tremendous metaphor. Superb work.
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Thank you brother! I appreciate it! “)
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Thank you my friend!! I appreciate it “) <3
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This piece is worded so well. Great description and a wonderful imagination here. Nice work.
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Thank you, brother! I appreciate it “)
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Thank you, Rosie C for the love and comment! “)
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This is deeply, thought-provoking.
I like the use of numbers in this. It makes it look like a list in the structure of a poem.
It’s different and inspiring. I can sense a lot of patience from the writer in this piece.
Captivating choice of words. I’m slightly hooked in. x
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Read MoreYour soul has withered, your conscience dead, your eyes don't cry, you have a heart of ice, your face so pale, so clammy everywhere, every word you utter to me filled with vulgarity... gives me violent shivers... Why vicious? You stole my heart and never gave it back, still you try...
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Bold… resonating write…
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Absolutely Awesome! Wow!
The phrases I love… “Sinful Redemption” (A paradoxical escape from salvation)
“secreting the nights away” (A novel spin from noun to verb – clandestine and furtive)
“your truth my undoing” (The curse of understanding)Just an amazing piece of work, girl.
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hello beautiful Meg good afternoon thank you graciously for such a great review 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good afternoon dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you 💕
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Amazing piece Crimsin!
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hello good afternoon dearest poet thank you graciously 💕
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You’re crushing it, Brenda!!! Luvin it!!!!
Naaj
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hi there dearest Naajir good afternoon thank you graciously for a lovely response 💕
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp.
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hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you for such a beautiful comment 💕
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Also an important message my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian