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Read Moresound check and roll filmevery moment captured in memoryblack and white sorrow caught in stillifeamazing journey through the hurtblue tears streak a child's facemomma's gone and daddy became my heroyou know he tried so hard to protect me from...
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thank you dearest Damian for feeling me so deeply on this I appreciate you 💕
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Your words have a way of slicing below the surface, to the core. The last two lines remind me of the lyrics, “ it’s better to burn out than it is to rust”. Keep shining, my friend.
I sincerely hope to meet you on the other side!
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thank you graciously dearest Gus for feeling me so deeply it’s appreciated 💕
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Read MoreYou will meetpeoplein life wholove to keep score."I've done this for you, soyou should do that for me."They keep a mental ledger.They're pathetic.Nothing is ever done out ofthe goodness of their heart.Their mind clicks withrecords and accounts.They are slaves...
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If they are keeping score like that, you would never break even. Nice piece
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Thank you. Yes.
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This is such an accurate telling. That quid pro quo system is so disappointing. And such a human trait, it seems
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Thanks, Willow
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Reminds me of the taxman. lol
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Thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Sounds like capitalism to me, and the force-fed propaganda woven into our heads on a daily basis. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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yes. Thanks, my friend.
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I have known these people my friend. You write this very well, with insight into their character.
John
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Read MoreI was born from two people who did not know what they created A force to be reckoned with, never to be underestimated. As I walk into the room, all eyes are on me. Smooth like iceNot seeing the fire being set free What they don't...
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fucking shit…. I left for a few weeks now you want me dead… ok im leaving
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Don’t you dare leave.
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Um…duly noted. Definitely destruction incarnate
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Thank you, Willow
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This is rather unsettling knowing the devastation that’s so common these days with active shooters. Very scary.
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I did not want you to feel that way. Going with the prompt I created with Ambyr, He picked creation, and I chose to go with devastation. That encompasses Fire, Water, Ice
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No problem. The poem has a lot of weight to it and a lot of fire in its delivery.
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Powerfully penned, Fia. This is a change of pace my friend, you always prove there is no subject you can’t tame. It’s too close to call, you both delivered amazing writes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I needed to stretch and get out of comfort zone
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You nailed this one. No doubt about it. The kind of write that pulls you along in an inexorable tide of power and rhyme. I keep envisioning cement shoes while reading 😁
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Haha well that’s interesting. Thank you Detritus
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I construct stories all the time, too. I relate to this.
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This reminds me of someone I used to work with. They had a full book worth of different stories in their head. They would go on all work shift telling me these stories.
Great ink, friend.
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I do the same when I’m unoccupied. Daydreaming can be constructive as long as you know which sidewalk is real.
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The mind is always free. Nicely done,
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Best prove what you cannot do before you discover what you can! Fine writing, thoughts distinguishable from maybe but not quite sure!
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Your words pulled on these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian