I like the rhyming scheme and the poem.

great flow and subject matter very beautiful ❤️

Hello, Her. You nailed it, my child-self was indeed a’visiting. It brings me true joy to know this poem was helpful for you!

You may borrow my rose-tinted glasses anytime.
Clay

Carefree, peaceful, a joyous, tranquil vibe. Nice work.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thia is a deeply moving poem, Crimsin. I felt especially those last 3 line. And the music made the poem more real to me, more tragic. To desire death, yet condemned to life, where only sadness can be found. And yet, there is also the deeply felt desire to be “understood”. Crimsin, you may not want anyone in your “onyx tower”, but your poem calls to us nonetheless. Is this not an invitation to at least feel your words?

You write powerfully, Crimsin.

Curt

hello dearest Curt of course it is I hope to move always that you got it makes me happy thank you ❤️

Hey I think you might well have cracked it Thomas .. You may be able to break an egg but you can’t beat a symbiotic bond now can ya squire .. This is smashing and has your literary DNA running right through it .. Neville 👍😎👍

Stimulating, intriguing, well said and creative. Great!

The pic drew us in but we read this twice and this right here , “obscure memories of
vaginas long gone.” We like this dude

Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend, you hit this one out of the park. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you so much.

The irreplaceable mistress. What would we do without her? I hit “tangerines and treehouses” and actually squealed! Brilliantly written, Thomas.

You are the best. Thanks.