Well done Damian… nice tight rhyme

Tight ink Have a great day!!

Bat

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you enjoyed the write. Yes, sometimes the song is enough, and there’s not always need for all the pomp & circumstance. Appreciate you.

Damian

Damian here you have proved with great virtuosity that less is more. This is a tightly crafted poem that puts me in the scene. I could see the club with my very own visualization. Very well done.

John

Well said, beautifully penned.

Tight, clean, and atmospheric. The groove comes through in the writing.

When a knife kisses, bone is a powerful image. Nice poem.

Damian, this is a dark pearl in the sea of poetry. You give your imagery power and grit that unfolds like a dark dream as I read. Truly grand read tonight.

John

Well written my friend. Magnificent.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story, my friend. Much obliged, for your compliment. I just never considered myself funny, all though maybe I’m funnier when I write, it would explain why some jokes bomb when I’m talking. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

Love this! You write like a modern day Kerouac who has been in his scene and can put it down in colorful and engaging words. Truly loved reading this. It gave me a smile and painted my evening with a scene I loved seeing through your words.

John

The two line summary actually hooked me into reading this Damian. Your command of words and imagery shows you are a masterful writer. Bravo! I’m going to have to read the rest of the chapters!

Damian this went to the bone! Thank you for sharing this. Let the ink pour.

Bat

Damian this is strong tonic and a grand read. Love how you wrote this with such great clarity like a beat writer for our modern age. My younger sister is a Trumpie and I have heard those conspiracy theories she believes about how Trump supposedly is being targeted politically but is innocent. No concern for the constitution of democracy. But you wrote your feelings with gusto and power. Great read my friend.

John