Phenomenally penned, Tim. Another fantastic collection my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Tim I wonder besides rain what these poems have in them that weave them together there is something ominous I can sense… great write 💕

Superb flow.

Ahhh! 🌧

What could be better, My Good Friend Tim, than a captivating soliloquy of imaginative Free Verse poetry from the rainbow of your dancing pen, creatively presenting the wonders of “Rain” to fill and soothe our parched imaginations.

Nice rhymes ‘n imagery in Poem 1, and your artwork choice sets the perfect mood.
I enjoyed each offering … particularly:

“For an hour, the sky recites
poems from heaven
and I listen…mesmerized.”

Outside my window, rain’s forecast today … I’m keeping my best umbrella and shiny red boots handy!
Good stuff, Syr Poet … much enjoyed, as usual! ⁓ Rascal🖌

150/100

Quite a collection, Sir Tim.
Especially the woman in the window piece. Yet, the beginning obviously draws the reader in, with the vivid imagery. Well stocked stack of art, this.
And good to see you here.

I love the math component in this. Some things don’t always add up but we must figure out the equation:))

Force of attraction formula in physics.
F = G * (m1 * m2) / r².

Force of attraction formula in humans
L= G * (m1 * m2) / r².

Where L is Love
G is Gentleman
M1 is number of times he messed up
M2 is number of times she messed up
R is number of failed make up attempts.

Cleverly penned, Tim. Amazing wordplay, love the whole equation vibe. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Tim I absolutely loved this. This is a brilliant use of the math metaphor for relationships with women. Truly an enjoyable and amazing read for me tonight.

John

Damn. This is next level. Mixing poetry AND math. Brilliant!!!

Much respect

Naaj

This is gentle and clever the way you turn numbers into feeling it lands with a quiet ache. I always can expect something fresh every time I go to the back of the book if you will…