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Read MoreWhen it comes to exercise, I love to walk. I've developed a routine that I do every day, and Ridgecrest Road, near where I live, is the perfect place to do it. It's quiet, and the scenic beauty is...
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I actually have another that’s more involved and longer but I’m not a confident story-teller. I was told of my lack of writing skills by an author. Thanks for the comment, Fia.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. I wouldn’t give up on storytelling my friend, this is a really good story. I liked this a lot, If I’m ever in the neighborhood, we’ll take a walk. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate the comment, Damian. Thanks.
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Powerful work. Great storytelling.
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Thank you, Thomas.
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Don’t listen to nay sayers Tim
I did that with my art stuff
Listened to the wrong people tell me my stuff wasn’t any good
Then I stopped listening and said to myself
I’m doing this for me
Fuck everyone elseKeep writing stories Tim
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I appreciate your comment, PS. Thank you.
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I enjoyed this. I grew up with trains and hobos, so the subject is something I find very interesting. You say you’ve just started writing short stories and in my book, you’re off to a bang up start. Also, your writing is lean and correct–just the way it should be.
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Thanks so much for your comment and welcome to the site, Sam. 🙂
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Powerful work. Excellent.
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Thanks very much, Thomas.
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Time this is engaging prose that took me into the scene. You write excellent accounts and I for one am a big fan of your writing here. Truly hauntingly powerful. Starts off like an ordinary day and then full of surprises.
John
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Read MoreBut Why Poetry? Because we don't care if wecrash on its shore and sinkin its mud up to our knees. Because maybe inducing a stanzamight keep one's head above the surfaceof an old lover whose memorywon't leave us alone. Maybe someone writesat...
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Cleverly penned, Tim. Oh, the life of a writer. Reading this was like Deja Vu my friend. Amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. :))
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Nice! “Because”, is the perfect answer to why we write poetry. So many possibilities, reasons, inspirations behind that magical word. I agree with Damian. Very clever write, my friend.
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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Amen brother!
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Thank you Styx. 🙂
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Read MoreCancer:That verminous dreg of death! A maulerwho sucker-punches, spars,and destroyswith body blowsits challenger's ghostly form. Even money—unable to go the distancewith all its supremacy—gets outwittedand KO'd. With undefeated form,Cancer prevails far too often. Life's referee of remaining daysstands over another challengerand vigorously counts...
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Superb work. Love the boxing metaphor.
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Thank you, Thomas.
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hello dearest Tim I hope they find a cure I cry everytime I see a St Judes comercial kids battling cancer my condolences on your family member 💕
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Thanks very much, Crimsin.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Into the book it belongs! The boxing metaphor is clever, people fighting for their life are very familiar with pugilist philosophy. Because it is indeed a fight, and some defy the odds for a while, because they possess a fighters heart. Excellent work, so sorry for your loss. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate your comment, Damian. Thanks.
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Great write Tim and sorry for your loss.
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Thanks very much, Peter.
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Read MoreIf I don't buy you roses If I don't buy you roses Don't bother asking whyTheir life spans but a momentCompared to you and I. Their petal's scented pleasuresMay soothe a troubled soulYet what you've done for me loveso few have...
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Two incredible poems my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much, Damian. 🙂
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That first stanza hit. I love flowers but they die, and I feel bad to see them go. Beautifully written.
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Thanks for the comment, Fia. 🙂
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Beautiful work, Tim. Powerhouse.
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Thank you Thomas. 🙂
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This is good. Why would it be the only story you write ?