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    No Diggity

    No Diggity (revolution is real and will be televised)   Damn girl, work it with them beats moving your sway and the jazz is sweet.   The beat drops into California rockin’, Tupac lays down the rifs; west coast east coast, shakin’, shakin’, there’s an uprisin’ in the clubs tonight.   Damn people, rockin’ east coast west coast worldwide...

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    • I know, I know. I need to do this, make an audio. I’m kind of scared it will sound like shit. Maybe I should do an AI version. And Canva is a good app to use for this?!

      Thanks Mary.

    • I can feel the movement in this! It’s got some heat on the burner!

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    Mirislavka

    Mirislavka Without any doubt    all the village boys wanted her .. Those with a pulse,    pubes and piercings did anyway .. The rest were either far too young, or too old to even contemplate what they    each knew to be unobtainable .. Even those feral twins who every now and...

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    • Desire and lust–she certainly has the right stuff to stir emotions and fan passionate flames inside of boys, men, and grandpas who ain’t dead yet. She reminds me of the gas station owner’s wife who’d sell us boys cokes and peanuts, then send us away with big lumps in our pants. (Through no fault of her own–all she did was make change and smile) Thoughts of your Mirislavka will be with me all day.

    • Bless you Sam you just made this old fella’s day .. Kindest of regards, Neville 😎👍

    • Passionately penned, Neville. Excellent write with brilliant detail and wonderful storytelling my friend. Outstanding work. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Beautiful Bruises

    Beautiful Bruises I cannot keep this to myself he said and then he kissed her shoulder naked .. Although indeed, that move was oh’ so very lightly executed .. Then resting on both elbows down he went oh’ so very low and slow .. Though...

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    Cova

    Cova Cova spoke most fondly of her    Andalusian sea .. She also spoke five languages    including mine .. Cova wore no prints upon her pretty finger tips and at first, I thought she was    a Basque spy .. Cova carried the scent of rock pools and...

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    • I wonder if she left because she was scared that she would feel more than just a fling or did she just want you to pay for the bill. Enjoyed this.

      • I wish I knew too .. but I’m glad you stopped by and gave my little scribble the thumbs up Fia .. Many thanks .. Neville 😎👍

    • Powerfully penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend. Great storytelling. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I don’t know, one minute she was there and the next .. she was just history and a poem in the making .. However, I sincerely thank you for stopping by .. Neville 😎👍

    • A captivating write! Well done, Neville! “)

      • My word, thank you kindly sir .. so very much appreciated .. Neville 😎👍

    • Your the Boss I can live and run with that .. thanks again & truly tooly .. Neville 😎👍

    • Great write and deserving of a silver medal.
      Cova left because she knew if she stayed three people would suffer.What a beautiful kind soul she was.
      Just think, she’s out there somewhere reading a poem or singing a song and there you are ….right there in her mind.
      See….she never left you.
      🙏

    • What a deliriously delightful thought you have left here for me .. Thanks a million Peter .. Seasons best & all good things for the swiftly approaching New Year .. Neville

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    Love Sonnet LXVII

    Love Sonnet LXVII   If I told you that I wanted you, would the stars fade out? If I asked you to stay, would you   lie down with me, sing songs to my heart? If you asked me to stay, I would share my life, my...

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    • Now you mention it and so eloquently .. I think that many of us have been there and asked the same searching questions .. Write on brother Curt .. You do it so well .. Neville 😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍

    • Brilliant and sweet. Excellent.

    • This ones of those that is written in simple words yet because the feelings are real and genuine, it’s like the only way to reflect these feelings is by the simplicity. no big words, no complication, it is as it is. It reads for me as a song of love and life, a sweet sad love song.

      • Forgot to mention the word sentimental too, it’s a sentimental poem/song.

      • It’s always a pleasure to read your comments, Light. Thank you for dropping them. Some poems are meant to be stated straight up, like driving a fast moving car and eyes on the road ahead. While some poems are meant to said softly, with flowers strewn across the road and lots of detours to smell them. I like your take on this poem.

    • Thank you, Mary. But those dots at the end of your words, please continue!! ;0)

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