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Read MoreHey lady, are you going my way?Hop in, there's nothing more to sayWe'll find a spot underneath the moonSit back and we'll listen to some tunesYou'll experience the universe & starsPlastic Jesus on the dash of my carJupiter, Neptune...
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You let me know the time & place and we’ll travel anywhere you want to go.
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Visions, I dig this! Reminds me of a 1950s film noir movie. You wrote this with pizzazz. Dig how you made this scene come alive as I read.
John
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Awesome! Yes. Totally 1950’s, early 1960’s vibe I was going for. Maybe some Eddie Cochran playing or Dick Dale. Had fun with this. Thanks John.
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Read MoreJesus had a huge supper, with large amounts of uppersCocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamineThe aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special dayThey offered him food, drink & loads of drugsMost disciples were upset with this...
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If you peed your pants, e-mail them to me. I’ll write a story about it!
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All good my friend. oh ok. Then send me your pants
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this really cracked me up and what is funny is they were talking about the possibility of Moses having psychedelic visions in Exodus because it was ancient belief taking these plants allowed to hear god great write 💕
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Interesting concept you mention Brenda. Thanks so much for the comments. xo
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Read MoreLead on,brave steed,up ambled stairs,this musky room,abrupt with noise.Let's climb until we find our chairsabove the sea of girls and boys.The very back... that's what I like.It's where we fuck on Friday night! Just take a seat beside me here.I'll...
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Poweful work and great rhyme. Excellent.
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Thank you so much, Thomas!
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Thanks, girl! I like to make my own entertainment when the lights go down!
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Read MoreSimplicity can produce brilliance Sometimes less is more Reconnecting through resilience Sure seemed easier before Drop the beat ride the bass line Rhythm is raging hard Ladies sipping on foreign wine Melody is her calling card Guitars solo over...
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Well done Damian… nice tight rhyme
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tight ink Have a great day!!
Bat
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Bat. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you enjoyed the write. Yes, sometimes the song is enough, and there’s not always need for all the pomp & circumstance. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian here you have proved with great virtuosity that less is more. This is a tightly crafted poem that puts me in the scene. I could see the club with my very own visualization. Very well done.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well said, beautifully penned.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tight, clean, and atmospheric. The groove comes through in the writing.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, CG. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m glad the groove comes through, that was my intent. I hadn’t read this one in a while but it still holds true. Appreciate you.
Damian
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