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Read MoreShe left me last week The sun came up that next morning It looked and felt great!
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Thank you
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Short yet profound. Which I have always been a fan of. I think you’ve conveyed the idea that “less is more” on multiple levels here. Not easily done.
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Appreciate that Benjamin. Thanks!
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Read MoreLast week she stood on the roof Threw a penny off and listened A few seconds went by Then she heard the faint bright sound of it hitting the cement She looked up into the night sky Clear, No planes, no clouds, nothing but darkness...
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There is no coming back from that. She couldn’t drop a watermelon?
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Guess not. Thanks Fia.
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That’s gonna leave a mark for sure, and a hell of a mess. Does everybody jump in your stories? I’ll correct that, I think you had a story where somebody got thrown off a roof. lol. Incredible write, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It’s my second story with roof jumping. Jumping off of a roof has always intrigued me. I’ve jumped off my parents roof a few times. The last time I broke my arm. Now I jump off my shed and into my pool. Safer. Thanks Damian.
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Read MoreI laugh because you don't see the blood dripping from my nails Be a good girl you said You want to be my good girl I never agreed to be good in any way shape or fashion I'll be good for that second...
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This is quite an ‘arousing’ piece Fia…..at least pour moi.😜
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Thank you, Peter. 😊
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What a piece you have presented here, great write indeed…
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Thank you, Fred 😊
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Without both the good and the bad, both would be meaningless words. An interesting piece!
Now, bring the bad. 😀
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On my way M.E.
Thank you ☺️
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Beautifully penned, Fia. “Kittens Got Claws,” comes to mind, which is a Whitesnake song. lol. This is a phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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So cool. Thank you Damian ☺️
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Fantastic.
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Read MoreDon’t want to be a father Don’t want my children to die Don't want to wake up one day And have them ask me why Why did you bring us to this world Then walk away without a goodbye? Why did you leave us to...
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Powerful stuff Sam.
There is an aching in those words.🙏-
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thank you
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Mr. Nash, I am childless at 38 but want children, yet the title of your poem caught my eye actually and I had to read on… deeply emotional piece and I appreciated reading it.
Daniel
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thank you
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Powerfully penned, Sam. This is an incredible write my friend, feel the sting in these words. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you
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always
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powerfull…
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Read MoreSometimes blindWe see beyond the veilIn liminal moments and thoughtsLost in distant keeningsDrawn to something beyond the edge of this -This, displaced, forgot...Drawn to whispered other knowingsFor we are strangers hereAnd we are missing thereTwo separate and yet, one...
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Nice write my friend…
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Thanks Fred. Just trying a different approach. Finding pictures on Pexels.com that interest me and trying to find words to fit them instead of just scribbling in a notebook. Hopefully it wasn’t to.painful an experience for you.
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I believe we all have such moments at times, even if we tend to dismiss or forget them. I’m happy to hear this gave you a thoughtful pause. 🌼
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Dear AJ,
I love that phrase “ we are strangers here, we are missing there”. Makes me think we are somewhere amidst the “ in between”
I enjoyed the journey of thought from this piece. Wonderful write of reflection. H🌷
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Wow. Didn’t see that one coming. Cleverly penned, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian