ooo… this is good … very sensual and intense

Chère G.,
Come close, a better and more inviting intro has not be written so far.
What a beauty you’ve made.

And the final four sentences are the cherry on the cake.
Love it to bits!
Warm regards, Gus

Gus, what a lovely thing to say. I’m so glad the opening drew you in, and the ending stayed with you. Thank you for reading so thoughtfully and for your wonderfully warm words. 🙂

oh, you are keeping time with the season. This is good one

congrats Thomas on your book

Well designed write about a situation that we all can relate to. The anguish is well described here. We feel it.
Well done, Thomas.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. Another excellent write with incredible storytelling my friend. Congrats, on the book. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

keep trying ..

This is kinda where my mind has been lately. I recently took a lower paying, more physically demanding job just to access these very feelings. I just wanted feel what real living is like again. You’ll only get what you give, and many of us have to give a lot more just to get a little, but these are the conditions that shape the poet. Keep trying, and keep in mind that more people see you than you realize! Life is hard fkn work! But I know you know this, because you are a poet!!

Thankfully you, we all, have access to let it all out in writing. That is our strongest voice. God knows that creative writing really helped me become who I am. I still have a vocal glitch, that hits me whenever it wants, but it isn’t a handicap. I have learned to be confident regardless. Writing gives us a super power. You will win the battles Fia.
Awesome write.

Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write with many deep layers my friend. This one has a musing vibe while turbulence is stirring beneath the surface. I concur with Mark. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

Thank you for this encouraging writing, dear Fia!
Settling with what you have already achieved, means standing still. But trying again and again, getting up after falling and trying anew is a brave way of progress and self development. Only doing so you can reach out for the stars!