Glad you’re back and posting erotica.
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This was quite creative. How he… the conceited king shriveled and you arose to be queen and well replenished off him, haha. Love it!

Daniel
Gothic-Surrealist

I can see your disappointed with men from this and your previous poems. Scars can go pretty deep and disappointment can be frustrating. But your expression is always deep in itself. That’s what writing is for.

The night is also when the pain hits for me. I don’t know how it is for others but the older I get the more painful life becomes. More stressful and overwhelming. Guess getting help would be best, but I’m kinda the strong one that holds up my little world. No time for breakdowns.

*Hug* you’re not alone, friend.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write as always my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

so beautifully fierce lovely Sapphire 💕

Only a few words but a lot said.👍

Powerfully penned, SW. Can’t get no clearer than that, spectacular write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Vivid and sharp.

Hoi hoi
There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.

And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
Very nice write. Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus

This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!

Daniel

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

If it doesn’t hurt, the love wasn’t real.

Thank you, Mary 🌼

hello dearest Joe this is so passionately and painfully written I never stop loving and don’t get it when people say they do hugs 💕

I think the love of self sometimes overcomes the love for another. Someone stops putting into the relationship while the other tries in overdrive to save it. Most everyone has loved and lost at some time, even if the feelings remain..🌼