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Read MoreThunder and Lightning Fateblack clouds over my life's tristesse Monotomy frustration and loneliness Silence hangs oppressive in the air Turning my suffering into despair Nature holds its breath, it's getting dark No bird sings, no wolf howls, no dog barks It's calm as in the beginning...
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Thank you so much for your kind words and appreciation, dear Peter!
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Beyond being so very literate, this poem simply glows with passion and gratitude. It gives me hope in humanity that such a person as you lives on the same beloved Earth as I. I feel very glad that you have experienced this and that I have at least a remote connection to your very special being, dear Elke. Warmly, Jim
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Your warm words make me blush, dear Jim! I am just an ordinary person like anyone else. We all belong to the human species. We were born on this planet in different appearance and with different attitudes. We should support one another instead of bringing us down and fighting us. Thanks a lot for your gracious comment!
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Absolutely – we are all artists and we all deserve love. 🙏💖
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There is a universe of emotion packed into this poem. When connection is made, miles mean nothing. Beautiful, Elke
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My deepest gratitude for your kind comment, dear Willow! A soul connection doesn’t depend on time or distance.
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Beautifully penned, Elke. Excellent write with such an honest message my friend. What a lovely tribute. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your awesome comment, dear Damian!) I’m speechless…
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Lovely Elke. Your poem warms my heart. Beautiful.
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Brilliant work.
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Beautiful, Elke. Those flashes of lightning bring visions of delight! Love your craft and word play in this!
Daniel
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Chère E.,
Hope you’ll enjoy your weekend.As for your beautiful poem, I’m with Jim M. Your truly felt (feld?) emotions shine through in every sentence!
A stellar write!
Keep them coming please!I’ll be back tomorrow for another eyeful of beauty.
Warm regards, Gus
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Read MoreOne moment you are concious.The next half awake.One moment you are walking. The next you are in a lake.It feels like an endless loop.Of fatigue,exhaustion. As I watch the flowers grow.My eyelids slowly begin to fall.Because I spent my whole day...
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Read MoreGood day to all of you!In 2018, when ‘songwriters in the Kitchen’ was still proudly up and running, there was a ‘Same Lyrics’ challenge going on for Christmas. I vowed not to do challenges and I vowed not to...
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The song is really beautiful, warm and joyous… as I was reading I could feel the melody and beat of it, I love the repeation and alternation between “I” and “you”, it’s like making vows between each other, a truly romantic and lovely love poem.
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Chère L.,
Since I’m a quarter French, a typical French start.
Hope this finds you well.If this comment is what you meant in the message?
If you intended to send me a poem (?), please send it to the e mail address:
Duhsjaak.13@gmail.comThank you anyway very very much for the compliments.
I’ll pass half of them to Michael A who wrote the lyrics.À same lyrics challenge, means that everyone who wants to be involved, writes a song to the same lyrics.
I believe that roughly 15 persons participated. But I’m not sure. It’s 7 years ago?!Grateful for your read and listen!
Warm regards, Gus
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Beautiful work. Vivid and sharp.
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Hoi Thomas,
Hope this finds you well?!Thank you for the compliments.
And also on behalf of Michael A (north east England), very grateful for you listen!
Kind regards, Gus
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This is a sweet read, and it is not annoying at all.
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Chère F.,
Hope this finds you well?!I do admire your talent and your writes, so I love a compliment if it’s coming from you.
Thank you so much!Warm regards, Gus
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a heartwarming, endearing ink. beautifully written. i enjoyed the charming, lyrical fluidity.
thank you, for your lovely words and a warm welcome, both are appreciated!
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Chère C.,
Now nice to see you again.
I must have done something wrong, since the reply I typed was lost. Sorry for that.Anyway, I am grateful for your listen. Also on behalf of Michael A of course.
See you around!
Warm regards, Gus
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with layers of depth my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Since I have not been posting because of work I am trying to give a little more. Thanks cuz
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Chère F.,
How can someone be powerful and sweet at the same time?
Lovely, what a lot of ‘tastes’ in one poem!Warm regards, Gus
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Thank you, Gus, for the compliment.
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and You my friend “stole” our interest and attention once again with your passionate and exquisite writing. I respect how each couplet both shows and tells us a story. Fantastic poem!
An espresso con panna to you.
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Thank you so much for that. Espresso con panna thank you Clay;))
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🙂
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Enough said with a smile. Thank you, Jim;))
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Oooh, very clever!
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Thank you, Willow :))
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Really like that ending, tight
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Thank you ME:))
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Amethyste wrote a new post
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hello beautiful poetess I most fear the unexpected nasty events that happen to people it is scary like for instance a lady was set on fire walking by a stranger… I don’t like there are such dreadful people in the world great write ❤️
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Hello dear. Thank you for reading my thoughts on paper. Feels less alone when shared.
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Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Existence is scary a lot like uncertainty, they’ve got similar effects. Excellent write my friend. Your work makes me ponder after reading it, and that’s a wonderful thing. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you. Appreciate you too. 🙂
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Well that’s simply beautiful.
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