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Thank you kindly for your comments John, I’m glad you felt this way while reading it.
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Passionately penned, Jade. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m happy you appreciated it Damian! ⚘️
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Thank you Visions, I appreciate your comments ⚘️
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This is a very sensual and steam piece of work, Jade.
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Thank you Naajir! I tend to feel deeply..
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Read MoreI am always as dark as my inkborn in a most distant ageas alluring as I am sageliving my life on death's brinkUsing this wicked smilejust to get what I wantable to tease then tauntwith a most lethal beguileFor...
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Posted the wrong poem… ooops
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Oh my friend, you are the Goddess of this genre. I love the subtle flavor of this as I read and could see it all vividly in my mind’s eye. Like a vision of beauty and passion in which you leave your mark on him. That indelible sign of a night he will remember and be marked by forever.
John
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Beautifully penned, LDF. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreAWAKEAbandoned hesitationEarly morning copulationI dig my nails into the sheets The mattress squeaksYou stretch my coreas undulations reach their peakand leave me begging you for moreMy bra and panties on the floorplay hide and seekbeyond the dooras if they've seen...
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It’s haunting and intoxicating.
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I’m glad you think so, Poe!
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This poem has both great depth of emotion about the man whose wife gazes on in the form of a picture and the sizzling sensual story. Truly a masterwork of erotic poetry. You have a fantastic ability to convey the feelings and scene letting me see it as though I were sitting in a corner watching.
John
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Wow, John… that is such an awesome comment! I’m so glad you stopped by to look at this piece and tell me what you think… and make my head swell. Thanks so much! I hope you keep liking my stuff and sitting in my corner watching. I’m all about erotica.
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Intense write, DK. A lot of depth underneath this steamy write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m so glad you caught that, Damian. This was meant to be like a chocolate Sunday… both hot and cold.
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This brings back some memories.
Especially the stained sheets and after sex mood swings.
Diggin this vibe for sureNaaj
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Naaj, you totally get me. I apologize for women everywhere when it comes to mood swings and sex, but it just happens. Probably a good reason to get drunk off your ass before you fuck. By the look of you, I’d say you could make me woozy without a drop of alcohol.
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You got that right, Keith. The hottest sex I ever had was with a baseball player who nailed me in my rental during college. My boyfriend walked in on us and just watched the whole thing. SHIT! So, I experienced getting caught and getting fucked at the same time.
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Meg, this is short but so potent. So straight to the steamy action. And yes alot of depth. You’d make me climax just as quick as this read I must say, I wouldn’t stand a chance holding out! Hehe! 😉
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Let’s hope not. I don’t want you launching that quickly!
I’m glad you like the poem, though!xoxo
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Read MoreHave you ever made love to a poet?I am creative in more ways than one.I can find poetry in the locks of your hair,and recite them in your ear as you come undone.I taste the words on your lips...
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Passionate rough writing. Well done.
Breathless. ❤️-
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Poemstar, I thank you for reading!! Always a pleasure.
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Passionately penned, P.G. Seductively beautiful this write is my friend. Clever wordplay as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, I thank you for reading and for always enjoying my word play. Appreciate you always, my friend.
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Like a sensual song of love and passion that I feel afloat in as I read and love where the river of your words took me. Love the feeling I got from this. Like an erotic romance of singular beauty and artistry.
John
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John, thank you sincerely. I am glad you enjoyed the ride. 🙂
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What do poets taste like?
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Like mischief and sin. How’s that sound?
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~P.G💋
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Sounds like me…💋
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Sensational xx
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Thank you Keith, still aiming to please.
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Superb work. You nailed it.
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Mr. Case, I am honored!
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~P.G💋
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LOVE this Title
Sorry
IM STEALING THIS ONE
MY VERSIÓN COMING SOON ???
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Thank you. Hopefully I am worthy of a mention.. lol go for it though!
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Poetically steamy and hot! Well done!
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M.E, thank you my dear friend.
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Read More⸻We didn’t need a manual.We had parents who were there—not hovering, not micromanaging,just there.And that was enough.So we learned to handle life.Alone. Early.And just fine.We were told what to doand when to do it.No debates, no feelings circles.No “gentle...
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Hi there Vision, I don’t know, I’ve been on this whole spinnaker of how life used to be. I think it’s the fact that the past 30 + years, life in America has just been decimated and eliminated; everything America was, is truly gone. And I’m feeling the burn. It’s not like generations before, where things would change and that was the way life goes, but it hasn’t just changed, It’s just gone.
Thank you for visiting. I always appreciate your presence on my page❤️
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I don’t agree with everything but that’s okay. Your work makes you think. It’s a topic that is right at the front of the world but everyone is ignoring it. I like how you just tackled the issue in the room.
You might enjoy Ray Bradbury’s short Story “The Veld” it echoes what you are highlighting here.
Keep up the intensity my friend
I really enjoyed thisJames
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Nice to see you James. I appreciate you coming by to read me. It’s just a crazy world we live in. That’s all. And I will check out Ray Bradbury Veld.
Thank you my friend
Jackie
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Jade this is a bonfire of passionate poetry. You have created a love poem of depth and beauty that swept me away as I read.
John