AWAKE
Abandoned hesitation
Early morning copulation
I dig my nails into the sheets
The mattress squeaks
You stretch my core
as undulations reach their peak
and leave me begging you for more
My bra and panties on the floor
play hide and seek
beyond the door
as if they’ve seen this room before
I don’t recall just how we met
or where
I know I kissed you on a dare
and shared a cab that ended here
then disappeared
into the rain
I feel the pain
your penetration
interrupts my concentration
jolts me forward from the rear
You
never asked my name
not even when I came
for you
I came for you
You asked me to
I
saw her picture
in a frame
She watched you fuck me
through the glass
deep up my ass
I left a stain
which too shall pass
What does she mean
to you
It’s haunting and intoxicating.
I’m glad you think so, Poe!
This poem has both great depth of emotion about the man whose wife gazes on in the form of a picture and the sizzling sensual story. Truly a masterwork of erotic poetry. You have a fantastic ability to convey the feelings and scene letting me see it as though I were sitting in a corner watching.
John
Wow, John… that is such an awesome comment! I’m so glad you stopped by to look at this piece and tell me what you think… and make my head swell. Thanks so much! I hope you keep liking my stuff and sitting in my corner watching. I’m all about erotica.
Intense write, DK. A lot of depth underneath this steamy write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
I’m so glad you caught that, Damian. This was meant to be like a chocolate Sunday… both hot and cold.
If you want intense love making, have an affair. At this point, everyone should have them. Keeps things exciting, fresh and exhilarating for both people. I’m sure your spouse is doing the same. Let’s keep it under wraps. Great work DK. xo
You got that right, Keith. The hottest sex I ever had was with a baseball player who nailed me in my rental during college. My boyfriend walked in on us and just watched the whole thing. SHIT! So, I experienced getting caught and getting fucked at the same time.
This brings back some memories.
Especially the stained sheets and after sex mood swings.
Diggin this vibe for sure
Naaj
Naaj, you totally get me. I apologize for women everywhere when it comes to mood swings and sex, but it just happens. Probably a good reason to get drunk off your ass before you fuck. By the look of you, I’d say you could make me woozy without a drop of alcohol.
Meg, this is short but so potent. So straight to the steamy action. And yes alot of depth. You’d make me climax just as quick as this read I must say, I wouldn’t stand a chance holding out! Hehe! 😉
Let’s hope not. I don’t want you launching that quickly!
I’m glad you like the poem, though!
xoxo