You take erotic prose to the level of great literature. So many write erotic describing the scenes but you take the reader into the heart as well. The dance of dialogue is told with the artistry of a woman who knows the finesse of writing a great story. And...

Your poetry here gleams like an obsidian blade in torchlight. The sheer poetry here is as lyrical as it is entrancing. I could feel what you wrote and it left me spellbound. John

Amethyste, you said more in this short poem than many do with longer ones. This spoke to me tonight and I could feel it in my heart. John

Strong as the most powerful tonic after a time of great heartbreak. Your poem flowed beautifully like that petals of a dark flower opening at midnight. John

This read like the best of Beat poetry that is to say is was a diamond. And I for one could dig the vibe here immensely. Raw and powerful and passionate. Great poetry often has a surprise ending that this one excelled at that. John