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Read MoreThe sputtering smoke of her lamp, throwing quivering shadows on the the cold stone walls of her tomb. But she cannot escape death. And she cannot embrace the life she once possessed in daylight. So, her Gothic heart thunders on, the crimson lamplight of her soullessness, merely...
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The atmospheric density and the haunting dark imagery catch the readers attention with the first words. Your gothic queen is a wonderfully terrifying beauty who makes me want to read more. Brilliant work, Daniel!
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Doing a complete rewrite. As I have realized the potential for this story…
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What imagery. You have the magic of the pen
Daniel. I was completely pulled in from the first line. Thanks for sharing
Jackie 👍🏻
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Read MoreThe moment the holy water sizzled on my flesh, I knewthat I was destined for flames. The priest saw it, frownedand no longer called me, "son."He walked on by, never to bless me again. The moment I died, I ascended.Below me...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Daniel I fear I will be judged for my delusions I think I will go to hell this is uplifting way to look at things 💕
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I believe I’m going to hell too. We can’t decide when, but we can decide how we meet that end. Love this life the fullest and to any good God that should count for something. I’ll stay strong if you stay strong, Brenda.
Daniel
Gothic-Surrealist
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thank you Daniel hugs 💕
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It’s true
I’ve toyed with you for years…
I felt your heat and watched you burn with desire. I was not free to act so I kept you on a string for years. You expressed your lust often.
Poetically we fucked.
Your masochism called me and while you suffered in unrequited lust you also loved every minute and the occasional 💕 I drowned you in…. It’s what people do who can’t but also can …BIG TORRID LIKE
FORMER RL AWARD
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hello dearest Poet good evening thank you it’s true we have come together many times… you never fail to inspire…with a great amount of lust and admiration I thank you again… you are cherished 💕
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Pretty intense!
I was transported for a few hot moments.
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Jim good evening thank you poet for a very lovely comment I’m happy to oblige 💕
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Nice write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love here I appreciate you 💕
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You almost roped me in.
It can’t be a sin to feel like this.
Love the artwork too.
Great write!
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hello dearest poet thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. This has so many shades of depth my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian for showing your love on this my dark repels some but it’s a part of me as the light is I appreciate you accepting me 💕
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I love it when you write dark poetry. It gives you “I should run” vibes
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hello beautiful Fia thank you graciously I’m not that bad though lol 💕
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Hoi hoi
This type of dark poems are generally not my favourite, but you make it work.
The artwork makes it a bit lighter.
Like it a lot.
Kind regards, Gus
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I love how deeply layered your ink is. Like I can read it multiple times and find new things. Which is something only great writes can do.
Wonderful, friend.
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hello dearest Nick good morning thank you graciously I’m happy you could read deeper into this one I was kind of unsure of it…I struggled with the ending thank you again for showing your love here 💕
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I adore how you sling the hash, right up my alley. Never at a lost for ink in a time zone bordering on dark.
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hello dearest Adagio thank you graciously you could tell I was holding the dark back I appreciate you 💕
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Incredible storytelling my friend, with lots of layers. Phenomenal write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously my imagination sometimes gets away from me I’m happy it worked 💕
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Superb write, Daniel. Appreciate you.
Damian