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Read MoreStress encircled her eyes. When any hope was hopelessand light-years away,she opened her dresser drawer. Beneath lengthypharmacy referralsand exponential credit card billsthe black metal trigger resembledthe color of a raven. At the speed of lightand with enough energyto cross the expanse of...
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Sadly no. Thanks for the comment, Fia.
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It is sad but you ended it with a bang. I love that you used the word stardust!
Even though she was tortured, you made her sparkle at the end.
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Nice observation Adelly. Thank you for the comment. 🙂
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Not every write has a happily ever after. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m glad you liked it. Thanks Damian. 🙂
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Tim, this was softly explosive. Like a dream that comes true in a dark and sad way. Exquisitely written my friend.
John
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Read MoreCASSIE THE WHORE Cassie was a fourth generation whore.It didn't offend her. It was her life.She embraced the empowermentif being able to set a price on her body. She was able to charge more than her sister, mother and granny. Cassie...
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Good story for a movie…..
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The house was torn down about 10 yrs ago. The funniest person I saw go in and out looked like Colonel Sanders with the white hair and clothes.
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I agree this could be done as a movie. Good write
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Paula, this is such a great story. Would make a perfect screenplay for a movie, I agree with the others. Actions packed, and uninhibited story telling. The plot unfolds with lots of surprises.
John
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What would Paula do with $10k….DM me.
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Hmmmm? Hire someone to cook out at the local park and give away the food. Replace my bed and sofa. Buy curtains. New teeth. New shoes and clothes. All gone.
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I like the cook out and giveaway at the local park.Share some good luck around is a nice thought.
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Hoi hoi Paula,
Like this one a lot.I know for a fact that some sorts of giving makes me richer.
And practicing it for a very very long time.Keep them (the poems) coming please?
Kind regards, Gus
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Read MoreDaisy & The Rock War It wasn't a race thing. Some kidsjust hate other kids. There were 4blond haired blue eyed kids and6 mixed race kids...and lots of rocks. But first, 7 year old Daisy had coercedlittle 6 yr old Joey...
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Omg that little..shit. She lived and he dies and the whole family destroyed because of a kiss that was never going to happen. Wickedly good story
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Thanks Fia.
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Guys have been getting hurt for centuries over women in some way or another. :/
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Paula this is a masterfully written poem. it had me riveted to read what happened next. Suspenseful with lots of surprises. You really engage the reader. Am very impressed.
John
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Read Morecoveted need leads me onward into the darkwith a witches eye I see what is going on in the doldrumall to spark an affliction, desperation a mode of opperationseeking culted desirefire speaks and ignites passionin dreaded dominion find yourself...
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give me a sip?
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smiles at you thank you Jim ❤️
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
I like that a little witches brew should do. Made me smile.
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thank you graciously lovely Fia was my pleasure I’m to give you a smile ❤️
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What a fantastic Halloween temptress poem that gripped me as I read. Playful and seductive and so wickedly dark.
John
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thank you graciously dearest John I’m happy you enjoyed ❤️
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Cleverly penned, Brenda. Amazing Halloween write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously you made me smile with your comment ❤️
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Happy Helloween Brenda. This kicks ass! Love the atmosphere you create.
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happy Halloween dearest Keith thank you graciously ❤️
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If you could syphon off the witches brew and sell it you’d be a millionaire. It’s a good job, only witches know how to make it.
Great read.
regards
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hello dearest James the powers that be tell me I won’t profit off my talents…then again it’s not what I seek… thank you for reading my spell ❤️
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