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Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Fia's Frankenstein Experience

Poetry

April 14, 2025

11

This is my masterpieceI have poured my heart and soul into this I must hand this in The pounding in my chest will not cease Every metaphorEvery juxtapositionWas executed with A precise description She is going to hate it.That witch of...

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- Nick DC
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you, Nick. It is hard to see your work handed back with red marks on it.
- Nick DC
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.
- Crimsin
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you, Brenda
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Tremendous work.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian
- M.E
  5 months ago
  
  I don’t know how I missed this one.
  Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)
  - Fia Naturie
    5 months ago
    
    Thank you, M.E
Daniel Long wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

The Grey Man and His Corpse

Horror, Poetry

April 14, 2025

0

Fierce gusts of icy sleet sheared their faces.Behind them, deep red footprints in the snow.A grey man carried a body, hollow of air, she was dusted in cherry flakes of snow.A glacial tear had wandered down her stiff cheek...

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Daniel Long wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Dear Death

Uncategorized

April 14, 2025

1

Dear death,I cannot shun the premonition that you'll be coming to my side soon. If it is so, please grant those that I care about a long life. Life, what a surreal thing. I've long come to the belief...

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- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  I feel death is not ready to see you. Time changes things from second to second. All we have is time.
Daniel Long wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

The Mortician

Horror, Short Stories

April 14, 2025

1

The sun had reigned throughout summer’s dusking day. Windy it was as it raked through the grass needles carpeting the graves, save one with the scent of fresh turned earth. The occasional clouds dancing with the sun...

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- Angels
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  This gave me the chills.
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Every Single Night

Uncategorized

April 14, 2025

14

Simplicity can produce brilliance Sometimes less is more Reconnecting through resilience Sure seemed easier before Drop the beat ride the bass line Rhythm is raging hard Ladies sipping on foreign wine Melody is her calling card Guitars solo over...

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12 Comments
- S. Libellule
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Well done Damian… nice tight rhyme
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Bat Powers
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Tight ink Have a great day!!
  
  Bat
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Bat. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you enjoyed the write. Yes, sometimes the song is enough, and there’s not always need for all the pomp & circumstance. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- goldenmyst
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Damian here you have proved with great virtuosity that less is more. This is a tightly crafted poem that puts me in the scene. I could see the club with my very own visualization. Very well done.
  
  John
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Well said, beautifully penned.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Curly Grace
  4 months ago
  
  Tight, clean, and atmospheric. The groove comes through in the writing.
  - Damian DeadLove
    4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, CG. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m glad the groove comes through, that was my intent. I hadn’t read this one in a while but it still holds true. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
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