Very good.

Beautiful ink! Thank you for sharing.

I love things which mingle the ethereal and the esoteric, and this does just that with a mystic flow. Well done 🌼

I don’t know or think about why I like things….but I like this very much.
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A well written piece! I feel like it ties me to the earth somehow. I love it! Well done, Kasai! “)

I don’t even know where to start with this one. It’s such a deeply spiritual & personal piece. And so incredibly beautiful. If we had a reading list option, this would be on my list. It’s so good to see your words again

hello beautiful Kasai so lovely and happy this poem and tenderness in the end I am enchanted 💕

Your poem sang to me like a song of the earth and love. And I felt your journey through these profoundly spiritual words. Truly a deeply felt poem that I felt in my soul.

John

Powerfully penned, Elke. A very clever write my friend, it kinda shows that humans never seem to learn. Excellent work, with a great message. Appreciate you.

Damian

Interesting take on pandemics. They certainly were not handled very well, but the vaccine for the modern one was was handed out fairly, in general. It was new territory so mistakes were made. I got all my shots and am glad of it. I do agree that there were too many restrictions put on the public at least here in the US.
This piece really made me feel like I was sitting there with the two ‘women’. You certainly have a talented pen Elke. To be transported to the moment you describe is really a rare and wonderful talent. I’m happy the you share it with us. I’d be happy to slip and fall in your direction. 😉 💙

You are a very good storyteller. To board people in their own homes to prevent the spread …yeah history did repeat itself with that. The difference is that people spoke online and got used to that, then speaking face to face. Thought-provoking piece.

Thank you, and how you changed the writing typography only enhanced the piece. It has been an enjoyment to work with you.

And, thank you right back, Fia! =)

You’re such an easy breeze to write beside.
It was interesting fun blending our individual skills and learning how you think.

You’re uniquely special! ⁓ Richard🖌

Beautifully penned, Richard & Fia. Amazing collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.

Damian

A great collaboration between the both of you. The wording brings attention to every detail like it was under a microscope. Two great writers together….great stuff. 🙂

This flows smoothly, sweetly and flawless, the reader won’t feel it’s a collaboration at all, I like how it’s like small promises come together to bond as a one loving poem, the title is wonderful too, a wonderful collaboration for sure. Thank You both.

This is cute. It had me giggling. Thanks for sharing it.

Well, now I see why you’ve adopted the name, “rascal”. That cold ocean water made me think of California and a certain angry female who…I’d better stop here. I believe you had fun with this, and it rubbed off on me. (Metaphorically)