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Read More© 2025This Prologue tells the absolute truth. What comes after is, well, not so much "truth," as it is ... um, what could come, perhaps. There IS hope that this "Secret" could lead to some happy truth. But Truth,...
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Read MoreSo Very Perfectly Flawed You may never know how often I opened your page and looked down on you like that posing naked from the waist down .. Was he really so damn good, or just another trick you turned to spite me .. I remember that shirt tho’...
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Thanks Curt .. I’m glad you were able to feel it my way .. Advice heeded just as I found my appetite again .. All Good Things to you & yours good sir .. Neville 😎👍
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Powerfully penned, Neville. Your words sting in this one my friend. Outstanding write with excellent detail per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cheers D .. 😎👍
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Wow, fantastic write. I was drawn in by the wonderful, descriptive phrasing…the combination of love and disappointment. No need to see the photo..,I already see it. Well done.
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You really are far too kind my friend. thank you so very much .. Neville 😎👍
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Superb work. Powerful imagery.
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Thanks Thomas 😎👍
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Read MoreEnlightenment There were no pockets in those saffron robes, no lies or dramas hide behind those unhurried furrowed brows .. Cross legged and almost directly opposite me, he sat for two thousand five hundred miles in third class, all the way from Bangkok to...
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Brilliant imagery. You bring this to life.
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Nice of you to say so Thomas .. Cheers mate .. Neville
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You are not the only one who got enlightened like this, and the truth it’s not that we are not smart, or can be easily deceived, in fact we are more intelligent than this, it’s just that we don’t think in their ways, or/and that our hearts doesn’t feel like theirs, but we learn don’t we? These incidents teach us that life is not like us or our hearts, how we think or feel, there is goodness and there is badness.
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How extraordinarily write You always seem to me, to be .. Bless You dear Light💕 You make my grey days seem golden 😎🌻💛👍
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Blush*☺️ at least I hope I got what You wanted us to get. May only golden and colorful rays bless your days 🌄🙏🏻✨💫🌈💕
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Brilliantly penned, Neville. Sharp and precise imagery my friend, once again you know how to tell a story. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks a bundle Damian .. That’ll do nicely sir .. very nicely indeed .. Neville 😎👍
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I like the rhyming scheme and the poem.
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I appreciate the read and the comment, Fia. I am happy you enjoyed both!
Thank you for stopping by.
Clay
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great flow and subject matter very beautiful ❤️
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Thank you, my friend! It was a gorgeous day and place that inspired it.
I appreciate you taking the time.
Clay
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Hello, Her. You nailed it, my child-self was indeed a’visiting. It brings me true joy to know this poem was helpful for you!
You may borrow my rose-tinted glasses anytime.
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Carefree, peaceful, a joyous, tranquil vibe. Nice work.
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Thank you, Visions_of_Insanity, you captured this poem’s spirit perfectly. I keep wishing I could return to that afternoon!
I appreciate the visit
Clay
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Read MoreMirislavka Without any doubt all the village boys wanted her .. Those with a pulse, pubes and piercings did anyway .. The rest were either far too young, or too old to even contemplate what they each knew to be unobtainable .. Even those feral twins who every now and...
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Desire and lust–she certainly has the right stuff to stir emotions and fan passionate flames inside of boys, men, and grandpas who ain’t dead yet. She reminds me of the gas station owner’s wife who’d sell us boys cokes and peanuts, then send us away with big lumps in our pants. (Through no fault of her own–all she did was make change and smile) Thoughts of your Mirislavka will be with me all day.
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Bless you Sam you just made this old fella’s day .. Kindest of regards, Neville 😎👍
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Passionately penned, Neville. Excellent write with brilliant detail and wonderful storytelling my friend. Outstanding work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Many thanks Damian .. sentiments reciprocated .. Neville 😎👍
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Whoa, Neville!! They say revenge is a dish best served cold. Well, this poem is cold, very cold indeed. It drips with the “sting” you felt and perhaps still feel? Betrayal is a dish with rotted food, and served with a smile. But to have it shoved in your face takes betrayal to another level. While I liked your poem, I have to leave the room cause it’s just too damn cold in here. After this, Neville I think you might want to put that pen in the oven, warm it up a little. And whatever you do, do not eat that food!!!
Curt