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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
This is my “Magic of Poetic Voice” submission
The Beast Confession
Confessions are made to come from the heart
To make you feel the weight of it
Whether is it good or bad from the start
I need you to sit and understand me a bitI wandered into a space without time
Alone with my thoughts
Never hoping that someone could be…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Read Moredriven insaneblue and greysleek bodycobra grillheadlightscutting nightsengine roarsdual pipes wheels rollchrome artdescribingintricate fleshfingeringher six speedclutchingthat lust horsepowerequalsfrictionloving torquesport bodyinvitingthe curvestop down road readysoft highwaydrag stripstarting linemy mustangyour corvettewe embraceunique styles Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2019
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The fast pace reminds me of an engine revving up and going down a racetrack
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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The beat, rhythm and pace is like a racing car! The reader wouldn’t know are You talking about a woman or a car lol. The closing lines are brilliant, and “unique styles” it is. Wonderful poem, to read it in the morning it fuels us with good energy to start the engine ✨
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Light. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That was the vibe I was going for I love when a write has more than one perspective or dual meanings. Thanks for that wonderful commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You are welcome my friend 😊
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Corvette! Corvette! I’m a ‘Vette girl. But that’s mostly because daddy was a Chevy guy and Ford was a dirty word around him. Once wrote a poem about a Mustang once though. Much enjoyed this one, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like cars in general, but I’m kinda a Ford guy though. Though I like Chevy’s too. Dodge is my least favorite. It was a dirty word around my dad when I was growing up. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cool dude. Great description. The energy & performance is highly moving. Excellent.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This had the rumbling force of a corvette being geared up for a rip roaring ride down the highway. And to me it also read like a sensual poem about the power of the engine getting ready to fly like bat out of hell down the highway of love. Fantastic work my friend.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite things about writing, is having the ability for double meanings in a piece. Nice catch. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oh yes… you have piqued
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lol, Oh really?;))
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Piqued but not peaked.💋
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Haha, thank you Peter;))
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Passionately penned, Fia. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;))
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An exciting time in a relationship. Clearly, beautifully stated.
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Thank you, Jim;))
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Chère F.,
I was not looking in your direction
You made my head turnO yes, definitely!
Warm regards, Gus-
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Thank you, Gus
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A very fresh read. Uplifting too.
Regards
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Thank you, James. I appreciate it
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Back for an eye full of beauty!
What a way
To start my Friday!
Warm regards, Gus
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Read MoreWelcome to the table. I want to give thanks to all the members of Stars Rite. The last time I did a dinner on the site was on DUP. It was fun to invite everyone I knew to the...
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Beautifully penned, Fia. I remember last Thanksgiving on DU as well. I agree that our new home is special, and I appreciate all the work you put in to keep the site running, cuz. Along with Sam and Bobbington and all that contribute to keeping the lights on in our creative sanctuary. I’m thankful for this community of gifted writers and amazing people who share their stories and invite us to experience their journey with them. Happy Thanksgiving to all of the Stars Rite family! Appreciate you all.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, it has been a pleasure
Reading your work and getting to know you cuz. Don’t forget the cranberries. Lol-
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Cranberries?? I thought you wanted me to bring the magic jellybeans, cuz. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Chère F.,
What a lovely idea to organise a Thnksgiving dinner.
I am still grateful for a number of very successful coops with DUP people. Very rewarding in terms of the gentle fun of putting energy into the work and make it work.From some 4.500 listens, to an estimated 12.500 (Loving you – with Faith Maree), it resonated immensely in Europe. I am trying in a very small way, to make that happen again.
I can perfectly understand that the burden on the DUP mistress became too heavy. Therefore, I am most grateful/thankful that you have taken the initiative to give us a safe harbour here.
And I will try to extend my being thankful to the rest of the days, and not only on the 27th of November.Warm regards, Gus
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Monsieur Gus, thank you so much for being part of Star Rite bringing your talent and sharing with all of us. Your in charge of the baguette’s.lol
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Outstanding piece of writing Fia. Your message and passion here on starsrite is unlike no other. Applause to you for keeping this site active and fresh all the time. Happy Thanksgiving to you & your family.
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Thank you for sharing your talents with us. We are unique and that is what keeps stars shining here. You are in charge of the beverages. Lol
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hello beautiful Fia Happy thanksgiving thank you for bringing us together and for dedicating yourself to us and this site ❤️
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Thank you crimsin, you have been a pivotal person here. Don’t leave the pie home. We need desert
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I’m afraid it’s too late for my plead to keep the poor turkey alive… But it’s never too late to express my deepest gratitude to you, dear Fia for dedicating your heart and soul to Starsrite🙏
You served a delicious meal with your writing😘-
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I left you the best part of the turkey. Did you bring the apple cider? Kinda thirsty.
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How sweet of you to leave me a piece of turkey, dear Fia!
Just look around, how many wonderful poets and poetesses came to your house. This speaks volumes about the charming hostess! 😘
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I’m so sorry I missed this “Friends-Giving”! It is a pleasure to be here among all of you, and I wish you a very Merry Christmas and Happy Hanukkah! Now, would someone please pass me some pumpkin pie, and that tub of Cool Whip!
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You are always welcome. You want light or regular cool whip. lol
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreIf you see on your post anyone commenting on shortening your URL, please let me know of Bobbington so we can remove it from the site. Thank you
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I’ll keep my eyes open, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you.
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what is the URL beautiful Fia?
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It’s the bar on top of the page.where you see stars rite name
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Chère F.,
I feel in safe hands with you.
And I am grateful for that.
Warm regards, Gus-
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Thank you, Gus
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Thanks for your attentiveness.
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Your welcome
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Okay, Fia, I’ll look out for that, but I’m curious as hell! So what’s it all about? I’ve never heard of this before.
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Thank you, I clicked on it, and it is definitely spam.
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What? Where? And do you want to go DM?
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This is my Magic of Poetic Voice submission
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The Beast Confession
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·Confessions are made to come from the heart
To make you feel the weight of it
Whether is it good or bad from the start
I n…Read More