this is badass dearest Damian love your message and flow 💕

Damn you just did a mini backroom confessional. What would they not do to rise, and there is always someone there to take it.

Monsters believe they hold all the cards. The funny thing it’s the people that give them power.

Great ink

Powerful and poignant.

Holy crap, what did you just do?! This is phenomenal!

“Savagely sedated saturation”

That is incredible alliteration right there! This whole thing just rocks the reader along…& that isn’t even saying anything about the message. Which is its own bag of holy crap! Clearly your late night musing hit a stride & you just ran with it, my friend!

I feel the heaviness and power in this write 💕

So glad you called me in on this write, Fia. I really dig what we accomplished here with this spill my friend. It was an honor working with you. Appreciate you.

Damian

Cleverly penned, Fia & M.E. Love the back and forth of the write my friends. Appreciate you both.

Damian

The pleasure is all mine, Fia! Thank you! “)

A poem with a tinge of Poe! Well done, Fia! “)

a very haunting write lovely Fia 💕

Powerfully penned, Fia. Love the, Poe vibes, my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.

Damian

There was a wicked man
who had a wicked cock…

But I’m a wicked girl
who wants to rock your world

Nice rhythm ‘n flow, Fia 🎶

With a Poe-esque like ambiience, you’ve creatively darkened the page with both spot-on and soft rhymes, spilt blood-shivering imagery … ever-so pleasing to the poet’s ear and mind’s-eye.

Your perfect title and artwork choices set the stage well for what’s to come, and that classic intro couplet surely awakens even the most passive reader’s interest.

“Once Upon a Midnight sky
A rendezvous between you and I”

Good stuff, Lady-Poet …
you’re such a pleasure to share with! ⁓ Rascal🖌

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. You wouldn’t be the first that felt that way, my own mother wanted to slap him upside the head a couple of times. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

Superb work.

Reminds me of a poem I wrote around the whole invasion of iraq. The poem is lost to me, but I remember some of the lines were.

“you can go ahead and die for your country
I value my life over everything
and if I’m gonna die
it’s not gonna be me wasted away
for a bunch of fucking creeps”

This poem has fire and I love that.

I’m gonna say I would love to throw a shoe at Joey G. If Adira doesn’t get him with her boot first. Ironically, I know a lot of musicians. All young & vibrant…& all in Nebraska. It would be amazing to see your words given the credit & voice they deserve. My partner wanted me to do songwriting for musicians but I shut it down because I “only write poetry.” 🤦‍♀️ I would write with you any day though. And I’m keeping my fingers crossed that your words are properly heard, my friend