Great job with the rhyming in this… engaging… carried me along…

Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Incredible lyrics my friend. Tight rhymes, incredible wordplay, great phrasing, nicely done. Also dig the music. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is so good. I can hear this as an opening to a show.

Love this couplet
“Sanity was the place you thought you craved.
Serenity was a fable purposely misplaced.”

You have some great lines in this piece.

I feel this.
A very moving piece.
Regards James

Thank you.

Powerfully penned, Thomas. An incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you. Appreciate it.

For our lives to be whole and in balance we must accept both light and darkness. Rarely an easy task. Very insightful piece!

Without darkness, how will we recognize the light? I love this piece, Peter

To me, darkness in this sense means trials and tribulations. If we never went through the darkness, we wouldn’t grow. I’ve embraced my dark times. I’m glad you wrote this, Peter.

Love the sheer erotic narrative here that draws me in and makes me want to stay until the very end. Truly a hot poem that inspired bedroom thoughts and feelings. I could feel this deep down where the sun doesn’t shine.

John

Passionately penned, Fia. You always make the temperature hotter with your writes my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

” They start with that whisper that hits behind the ear

A practiced tone

That causes goose bumps and raises those baby hairs ”

Yeahhh…this paints a pic of some nice memories.

Nicely written

Naaj

I’ve always been accused of being a grown man… now you know why… this was a great story.. perfectly done…love it.