That is a selfish thought/ relatable. I know people who said they would want to leave before their spouse. Especially when they have been with them a long time.

Tremendous.

I really like this. Sometimes I think about this sort of thing and some people just don’t get it. They think it’s weird or morbid. 😅

hello dearest Benny I want to die first because I know my husband will be fine with me and not so much me if he died first we all have our reasons I don’t think it selfish 💕

This is sweet, and I agree with Crimsin, not truly selfish. Ideally, Lovers should be able to die at exactly the same time.

Beautifully penned, M.E. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Very interesting dialogue. Is this internal or external?
It is not about painting, I agree. nice work

Tremendous metaphor. Superb work.

Thank you my friend!! I appreciate it “) <3

This piece is worded so well. Great description and a wonderful imagination here. Nice work.

Thank you, Rosie C for the love and comment! “)

This is deeply, thought-provoking.

I like the use of numbers in this. It makes it look like a list in the structure of a poem.

It’s different and inspiring. I can sense a lot of patience from the writer in this piece.

Captivating choice of words. I’m slightly hooked in. x

I loved the last line. It reads like a bang to my heart. A heart touching piece. Well done. “)

Beautifully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Nice rhythm and cadence, it has an anthem feel. Incredible words my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerful work.

Oh wow, I like this! You picked a great beat for the lyrics. I’m like neon after listening to that!

Nicely done, Drieks. You’re an incredible lyricist my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian