Terrific write Willow….very very good.🙏

All I have is a pen, girl, no sword. But what do they say? The pen is mightier than the sword?

The opening of this with the whispering was perfect. I can feel your words through the music nice melding.

Bella. Bravissima! 🌼

Powerfully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! The arrangement worked nicely with the words, whispers well placed, the piano was also a great choice. Amazing work my friend, excellent execution. Appreciate you.

Damian

🙃🖊🗡

Superb work. Powerful.

Such eloquent passion and imagery. This definitely moves the imagination and the spirit

I think of immortality from another side of what you’re saying. If you’re immortal but only you…imagine constantly being around to witness the fall of everyone you know & care about? No thank you. I’m with you on this one

Thank you, Hj xoxo

hello beautiful Fia this is so passionate and painful I only hope it is fiction love can be cruel 💕

Powerfully penned, Fia. Simply amazing write my friend, you changed it up a little on this one. Excellent! Appreciate you.

Damian

Awww, Fia =(

How poignantly vivid your pen has laid its sorrows’ disappointments upon our hearts … so many times we’ve gone through such relatably plaintive ache, yet, your poetic emotion expresses it all so vividly, as though it could be any one of us experiencing your own moments of disquiet.

“Love is a demon’s creation.
It obscures and twists the mind,
That being in complete submergence is good.”

Oh, yes! Nothing’s like LOVE it when it’s good, when all is wine and roses; for, love shall seek not but for its own satisfaction. It will bend and twist you, and shine and dim upon you, while holding onto those within its grip. And, there is no single answer to the question of what love really is, but I have learned that when love is in control, there are no guarantees.

I so admire the smoothness and imagery with which you paint emotions, feeling, and thoughts upon the canvas our minds, hearts, and souls … the hallmarks of a true artist’s touch.

Swearing we’ll never fall in-love again, our needs are far too deep not to.
Beautiful work, Dear Poetess … thank you for sharing! ⁓ Richard🖌

Superb artwork choice:
(V2L1, add an apostrophe to Passion’s)

hello dearest Thomas who is to say what wisdom is maybe knowing it is futile is true wisdom…not all of us play games and if we do we may not realize it until later that might be wisdom a reckoning with behaviors… great write 💕

Cleverly penned, Thomas. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks, my friend.

Thank you.

“traces of humanity remain”. Basically how I feel about the world as a whole. Great ink.

Thank you. I appreciate it.

this is beautiful dearest Benny 💕

Even if they could hear it, some of them would still say it. Imaginations in full stagnation. This is lovely. Really builds the visual beautifully

Thanks and I’m glad you enjoyed. 🙏

I am madly enthralled and peaked by this loveliness. The depth is Everything. Umph.

Gentle man, thank you for whispering this one upon us❤️