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Thank you crimsin ❣️
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Oh damn…
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Thank you, Willow❣️
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Passionately penned, Fia. This write is fire my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian I need to get this fire started somehow. Lol
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I do this to women …
Then they burn for me
Wait
Listen
I may be at your door ….-
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Ohh, waiting.
Big like
Thank you PoetSpeak ❣️
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The flames of that passionate fire are rising high in this one, Fia. Nice one.
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Thank you, Tim had to bring a little fire❣️
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Do you see me leaning in? This poem has made me a voyeur. Very nice, Fia, love it.
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Thank you Kay-1😊
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Willow wrote a new post
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Read MoreI could write him a love poembut if I get it right...you wouldn't recognize it ...not for what it really was none of those butterfly wings ...tickling the tummyno sweet comparison to cotton candy nah...it's nothing like that when he says my name...I go...
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Sounds like a harmonious relationship to me. Good write 🌼
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It’s a gift beyond measure. Thank you
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hello beautiful Willow a very sexy and passionate write I understand about him alone having the key but in my case it is of a divine origin my man that you have such in the flesh is beautiful 💕
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It’s so beautiful that I have no words. Thank you, beautiful 🧡
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Beautifully executed. I love how you say it is not recognized by butterfly wings
Not everyone will see the key.
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Not everyone is meant to. That’s why there’s only one. Thank you
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Beautifully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! Love the layers in this piece, your writes are authentically you my friend. I’m a huge fan, amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I wouldn’t even know how not to be authentic at this point. Good or bad, I am what I am. Who knows where it will go next? Thank you, my friend
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I don’t need butterflies, honestly. What we have is more powerful than their fragile wings. Thank you, girl
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This is so so smooth, exciting and textured. I love it!, Ain’t nothing like having your own🌹
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Nope, there isn’t. Thank you 😊
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This vibe is so, so sensual and moving. The connection….so deep and meaningful.
Just exquisite!!
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Thank you, my friend
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Read MoreWhat happened to your heart?It used to be so strong.When did these damn nightsget so fuckin longYou're my Lady of ashes,and I'm all burnt up.You threw me in the fire;And my soul has had enough.I've had enough...I've had enough,I've...
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So much sadness and longing in few words. Well written, brother.
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Thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. The longing is felt in your words, amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks. Much appreciated.
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Thank you so much.
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Read MoreI've always been a drifterfor as long as I can remember. I've never had the drive to chase dreams, and rarely even had any dreams to begin with. I never chased love, or a mortgage, or children. Somehow, I just...
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I have a collection of driftwood here with me. Because I couldn’t get over the beauty of something untethered just floating along, becoming weather & all the more beautiful for its age & travels. This one made me smile
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Thanks Willow…..we are all just drifting and how pleasant that would be if we allowed ourselves the time to realise it.
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Read MoreYour inconsistencies are consistentHappy yet state your sadAngry but seem to be gladRelaxed but wound tightWant to be gentle yet you biteNo one understandsNo one took the timeNo one gave a shitAlways left behindWeeping from rageSpilling into the calm...
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Intriguing…
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Thank you, willow
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I like the contrast you used in some verses. Dark thoughts indeed. Well done, Fia!
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Thank you, M.E appreciate that
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend, with dark vibes very present. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. was in the zone.
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Thank you, Adira;))
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Fantatic!
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Thank you, Adagio
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G’Mornin’, Fia 🌤️
Good title, and what a great lead-in with V1’s frustrating contradictions setting the mood for what’s to come (L2, make it “you’re” sad).
Boy howdy! You sure know how to express the angst so many of us have had to endure and overcome; yet, it seems some never do … sadly so.You’re such a creative writer, Ria: I admire your keen ability to weave vivid imagery and emotion throughout every verse and in the use of spot-on rhymes, timely line-breaks, and smooth flow.
Excellent wrap-up verse, too. For rhyme’s sake with “despair,” consider using “there” rather than “here” (just a thought).“Wake, wake from this despair! (great poe-esque touch)
It is me you’re talking to …
no one else is there.”Fia, you’re such a joy to read and share with. 🌈
Thank you ever-so warmly! ⁓ Richard🖌-
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Thank you so much for the compliment and comment. Richard I appreciate it
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Oh, sure thing, Fia!
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Yes, it has been changed. Ty ;))
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You misunderstood, Fia … I meant to change L4 to “there”. Not L2, which was fine as “despair”.
So “despair” and “there” rhyme.
(like this)
Still, you find me in your dreams
Wake, wake from this despair
It is me you’re talking to
No one else is there.
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Very captivating.
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Thank you, CasketSharpe;))
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Thank you, Steven;))
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hello lovely Fia a very fiery passion powerful 💕