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My name is Bobbington and I love to cook. Today I will contribute a comfort breakfast I love to indulge in on the weekend.For reference of the drink, it is Pina colada mix w/ ice blended w/ grenadine
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Bobbington posted in the group Cooking with Bobby
Hello to all!
My name is Bobbington and I love to cook. Today I will contribute a comfort breakfast I love to indulge in on the weekend.For reference of the drink, it is Pina colada mix w/ ice blended w/ grenadine
This post is not sponsered by Mcdonalds ™ ©
A simple Start To This Group
McDonalds Breakfast
Pancakes and Sausage For…Read More![]()
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Read MoreSo stain—as marks that remain longer than intent,and hesitation pressed into the grain. Second guess,doubt’s small fracture widening,as though the Voice were drowned,as though we mistook the silencefor absence. But sustain is not the clean note held—it is the rough edge,the...
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Hey Fia, I think you’ve captured the heart of it beautifully. The poem is holding onto a truth: that even when it feels like silence or loss, we’re not ourselves erased. What seems like absence is often a hidden kind of leading, and the very marks we carry become proof that we were being guided all along. Something like that.
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
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Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More
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Thank you
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So, you’re staying that nothing is gone and even though it may feel like you’re losing it, You should stay fast because you are not erased but being led down a path you cannot see? That is what I get.