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Read MoreMy skin hurts. It feels like they're ripping it off my bones—sliver by sliver. I can't scream anymore. My voice left me an hour after they started. They said that once it's done, I'll be a changed person. Yeah,...
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Sexy & well written. Nice work Fia.
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Thank you Vision 😊
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Powerful work. You bring this to vivid life.
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Read MoreYou wouldn’t think lonelinesscould breathe between our warm bodies,not when we lie naked togetherclose enough to feel each others breath. But it can.And sometimes, it does.I lie beside you,listening for your soft drift into sleep,hoping,almost praying,that your hand will wander,and...
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This is seriously lovely and not only took my breath away but replaced some of the cold of a very cold day with some much needed warmth .. Neville
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Thank you Neville.
Words that make others warm are the best words.🙏
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This is very nice.
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Beautifully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work. You bring this to life.
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Thanks for reading and your kind comment.🙏
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Read MoreFroward.I found the word highlighted in my Bible.I remember liking how it rolled off my tongue. And thinking about tongues,all the women I loved over the years came to mind.Red dresses dancingbetween shots of rock gutand sloppy bar bands. Wayward.Full of...
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent storytelling my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate it.
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Brilliant .. sums it up perfectly .. Neville
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Thank you Neville. I appreciate you.
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This is fantastic poetry writing my friend! Gritty, strong, like a shot of whiskey. Colorful, great story telling, and imagery. Great work.
John
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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Waw raw and I can see the imagery in this.
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Thank you so much.
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Goldenmyst said it accurately. I concur wholeheartedly.
But, thunderbird? My god, man. At the least Seagrams 7 !!! LOL
This is very good writing. A bullseye on a dartboard of a swanky bar life.
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lol. Thank you, my friend.
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Outstanding and real. Nice work.
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Thank you.
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I love how you wove it all together into a cohesive story. There’s an underlying homage to the women and their fire and marks left on you that ties this all together so beautifully. I can’t help but think you made a difference in their existence as well. Fire water or no, this one is brilliant
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Thank you. I appreciate you.
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Read MoreIn winter’s depth,I walked broken streets.Empty pockets.Head full of hissing demons.Whiskey for warmth.Neon nights for company. Underneath the frostand frozen hearts.Underneath the lonelinessin shadowed rooms.Something small, powerful—a dim pulse, barely there, but consistent.A heat without a name. And these days?Well, I’m...
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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Thomas this spoke to me of a man who found the summer within after a long lifetime in winter. Really loved where this took me as I read. Truly fine work.
John
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Thanks, John. Much appreciated.
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This is great work
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Much appreciated.
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Read Moregirl, you been sitting on that barstool but you ain't drinking you running or thinking?cuz I know the look in those eyesstare into the darkness they can't hideevery nightwhat's on your mind? I’ve been on the outside looking inonly my past knows...
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Perhaps! The best poem that I have read on Stars. I am not very good with comments, but this one grabbed my soul, Lady! This one deserves an award.
Al
PS. Keep in touch.
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Mary and I thank you from the bottom of our hearts. This was an expression long in the building and much in need of voice.
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Powerhouse,both of you are amazing women.
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Thank you so much, Thomas. We greatly appreciate you
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Really love this, the two of you simply rock Ladies
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We needed to give this one its moment. Thank you so much on behalf of both of us
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Powerfully penned, Willow & Mary. I love the guitar riff in this, and have got to ask what was that? A cello or violin at the beginning and end with a distorted effect on it. Whoever made that call, that was pretty cool. Nice collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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That was indeed a cello! That was my call. Cello has the same deep gut effect as bass…which is my obsession. Mary digs violin more. But I’m rubbing off on her. 😉 We poured ourselves into this one. Thank you so much, my friend
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This is one inspirational powerhouse of a collab
Take a bow, ladies.
Ya’ll have definitely outdone yourselvesMuch respect
Naaj
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Thank you so much, Naaj. This was a labor of love and a reignition for us both. I’ll pass along your words to Mary 😊
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling my friend. This is really good. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian