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Read MoreWhat we need is a prudent purveyor A fingerless wine Won't touch youUseless in panicLike a kettle Whistling before the heatDo with distinctionAbandon the process
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Thank you Fia! At least its a call to step cautiously and with intent, more aware of our iniquities.
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Thank you for the warm welcoming Fia
You are not wrong about your assertion. In addition- I would say we have to see our faults and try to be aware “to not fall inside” -
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Short, cute, deep — as are our holes. I have surely fallen in my own, many times, and struggled to climb out. Then I fell into a massive one, which I will never escape. But that’s okay, it’s just my wife, and we have been deep in each other for more than 33 years. Nice stuff, Brad.
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Thank you FlatDaddy. yes You get it very well. They will exist because of our will, but we are to fight against it!
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Oh, Brad, whatever must we do if we do not wish to fight? Sometimes a peaceful conjoining can lead to better things. Two holes are better than one, in our case; it has become a tunnel of love, ever leading from one to the other.
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hello dearest Brad you are very clever I like the way you think ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin! You made me smile and warm my heart!
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Read MoreThe Rent Whips my back Leaving deep scars The Rent Keeps me from sleep It keeps me from sleep The Rent Binds my dreams The Rent Binds my thoughts Snuffs my desire Dousing my fire The Rent Wrecks my mind My mind is all I have And I'm going insane My mind is all I...
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Thank you for sharing this. A very direct and insightful poem, I really appreciate the “whipping” euphemism for rent. Hit the nail on the head!
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Thanks for reading.
I feel we over pay for every breath you take.
Regards James
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Over pay is right. You exemplify that very well in this piece.
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Oh my goodness, I really like how intense that reading is. I agree that the rent is too high
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Yes, the rent of living is high. Every thing is rented. The air, the time, the moments of our lives, every second is paid for. And it goes up every day.
Thanks for reading and listening
Regards James
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hello dearest James I know the feeling this is wonderful I feel the pain of it ❤️
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Every moment costs money and it just rises and rises. I feel it. I see what it does to people.
It cost a lot to exist.Thanks for reading
Regards James
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Read MoreThey say fire and ice can't be together.But how come we feel a connection however?She was fire,passion and desire. She would melt the coldest of hearts.And understands most of the parts.Her hair is made of flame. Her heart made ablame.Her skin...
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Aww Fire and ice can go together, and you proved it with this write.
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Read MoreA walk in the forest In the forest we walk hand in hand Bitter-sweet bird song of love and despair And the scent of flowers linger in the air I feel like in a fairytale wonderland On a cosy mossbed we take a seat You...
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Strangely erotic this piece, at least for me.
Nice work Elke
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Sometimes I wonder myself how I come up with such weird ideas. 😅 Thanks a lot for commenting, Peter!
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Hahaha, dark romance, freaking awesome
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Thank you very much for reading and writing such a kind comment, I_ÍS_ME! Great to meet you again here!
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What a hot, sizzling piece. Love the wording and description here. SEXY!!!! Your poetry always shines Elke..xoxox
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Thank you so much, dear Keith! Your supporting and appreciative comments mean the world to me! XOXO
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Well damn! I wasn’t expecting that ending!
(The moon was bad ass that night, wasn’t it!)
The rhymes bind the lines together really well. It was a very sweetly carried poem, until you devour your beau! LOL.
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comment and your appreciation, my friend. Tuesday night I watched lady Moon, she looked pretty innocent, impossible to blame my badass fantasy on her. 🤣
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I feel that it would be worth it.
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Watch out! I might come for you next month!😂
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Please!!
Can we make it tonight … or now?! 😉
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Darkly romantic just how I like it, hehe.
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What an honor to hear this from the king of dark romance! 🙏🏼
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Passionately penned, Elke. What a lovely dark write with a touch of romance, nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Once again my deepest gratitude for your gracious comment, dear Damian!
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A forest of stepping stones on to the ornaments of beautiful life surrounded by the dark velvet of memories.
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The dark velvet of memories… Thank you so much for your poetic comment, dear Adagio!
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